| Reviews for The Immortal Alliance |
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   shedges19 chapter 3 . 4/21/2018 Are you going to do more of the story |
| Alissa Amori chapter 3 . 6/21/2015 Wow, what an interesting concept, can't wait for more |
| WhiteEagle1985 chapter 3 . 6/7/2015 Awesome story here! I can't wait to read more! So it's going to be Pertemis and Apollo/Zoe for the main pairings? I like that, seeing here they are twin brother and sister (though Perzoe is one of my favorite pairings and the immortals tended to not have any taboos against incest)! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/27/2015 This is great! |
| Son Of Fenris chapter 3 . 4/26/2015 so I'm guessing Apollo and Artemis aren't born yet huh. other than that, I love your story. but can you have Thalia and Nico plus some others be in the story. |
| MythicalParadox chapter 3 . 4/26/2015 Interesting story, very curious about what's going to happen next. |
| Athanaetos chapter 3 . 4/26/2015 You're alive! Thats great news ! Update sooner next time please |
| Danny Nightshade chapter 3 . 4/26/2015 Fantasic story and chaoter you have made. I can't wait on how you get the pair of Twins (Artemis and Apollo, Zoe and Percy) to fall in love with each other. Ch. 4 will be even better then this one hopefully. |
| guest chapter 2 . 10/5/2014 great...can't wait for apollo and artemis to enter the storyline,update soon! |
| nightshadow chapter 2 . 10/3/2014 wow awesome chapter keep it up so cant wait to see how the punishment will be with the soul great idea |
| guest chapter 1 . 10/2/2014 great start...update soon! |
| EnderWolf89 chapter 2 . 10/3/2014 Continue please. You are the only person who had this kind of idea. I respect you for that. |
| ShiaraRocker93 chapter 1 . 9/29/2014 Oh My gods! I can't wait for the next chapter of this GORRAM AWESOME story. Team Pertemis 4ever! |
| Mikeo chapter 1 . 9/27/2014 Incredible I like this new idea. Thanks -mikeo |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/27/2014 I just wanted to say that I love your sory so far and the idea behind it, but he is going to have to be a lot more powerful than the titan of dusk. Not a whole lot you can do in that position and I would imagen that not a lot of power would come with that. |
