I've finally finished the story! You were right, it was left kind of empty. I'm really feeling sad for the whole situation. If it isn't the end I hope there is another story relating to this! I hope I don't sound like I'm making flames because I'm not. I just feel sad at the story ending and the way it did. But I must admi, you have incredible writing ability! i would've wrote it as a happy ending, but that's no fun, is it? Well, here's to hoping in knowing kaho's future. I'm going to go on ahead now and read Not Human and then Solace since it is connecting to the story. Cheerio! (Haha just adding that to make it sound more of a greeting them just "cheers," as i was intending to write.)

Wonderful! Marvelous! Such a great chapter! All the chapters before were given great thought as well. You seem to be placing the events perfectly in places that CLAMP did not ever mention! Oh, but I have a comment. If I may, I think that the spell, the vision Sakura had of the world without feelings for the one you loved most was not that caused bu Yue, but by part of Clow's plan, right? I mean Yue wouldn't want to give her a chance, much less a vision that would aid in her realization of the seriousness in the situation and actually fight against him, right? Nevertheless, I still look forward to the story till it's very last chapter (it's been such a long time since I longed for such great written skill such as this!).

Such an awesome chapter! I am on my way to reading the next segment but I was just wondering: That high-backed red chair you mentioned in the story, it's not possibly the chair that Clow died in, right? I mean, according to the anime, it should've stayed in that mansion on that hill in Tomoeda, because Eriol left it there still when he moved back to England, right (if you refer to Movie 2)? Well I was just wondering. Keep up the good work in your future stories (no pressure!)!

I completely agree with your author's note at the beginning of the story. I feel bad though, that you recieved flames for writing about this pairing.

AW MAN. Does that mean Kaho will be with Eriol or not? T_T WHY

Meanie! WAH WAH. IT'S SO ANGSTY! WAH WAH... IT SEEMS AS THOUGH KAHO AND ERIOL AREN'T HAPPY or something T_T WAH *sniffy*

Oh well, hehe, the story was good ], but I'm more used to "happily ever after". A change it good (haha) but there's this nagging feeling in my stomach that tells me the ending was too angsty for me T_T. STILL, THE STORY WAS GREAT. THE BEST KAHO FIC EVER THAT I DID NOT JUST SCAN THROUGH BUT ACTUALLY READ WORD BY WORD. ]

OMG! One more chapter to go but... it seems like Kaho and Eriol aren't gonna be together O_O. Plz don't let chap 12 be a sad chapter T_T. But I'm still gonna read it even if it's sad, haha

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it sounds as though clow is dangerous *looks suspiciously at your plot* .

I don't get why people hate Kaho either. But I think it's because EK is canon and ET isn't. Since ET is much more popular and stuff, they hate Kaho cuz she "stole" Eriol away from Tomoyo (sarcastic O.o)

OMFG! THAT WAS SO GOOD! OMG! I don't get HOW you can write SUCH A GOOD STORY! SO CREATIVE. Ruby attacking like that.

A question about this chappie though, was Ruby kissing Kaho? O_O!

OMFG, I was planning on reviewing at the end of the story but I HAVE TO REVIEW NOW.

Ok, first of all, I LOVE THIS STORY! Most Kaho stories are SO short or are just one-shots.

And the part in Kaho's dream was haha, good!

Having now read the story in its entirety, I shall now reflect upon it as a whole.

Certainly a sense of loss and the inevitable has been central to this story, and I am appreciative and thankful for the fact that you made clear early on in no uncertain terms what readers should expect: Angst, sadness, consequences of forbidden love. I am also truly grateful for the fact that you kept physical elements of the romance to a minimum, thank you.

As was your intention, the story did not complete itself for me; Kaho's story is far from finished. Right now, all I can think about is how I might incorporate what I've learned from reading your story and using it to enrichen my own, when it comes time for me to write it. Like L-chan said, this story provides wonderful insight into Kaho's character; this was her story.

I have glanced through the messages, and found the two that flamed you; they were rather childish. Though I too find myself feeling uneasy at moments of your story, I respect the fact that this is a excellent piece of work that earnestly expands upon the personality of the characters involved, as set forth by the original.

Highest regards,

Cal-Reflector

... the pain, the pain of it all.

I have just one question, and perhaps it will be revealed in the next chapter, but how could Touya feel happy to know what had passed between Yue, Eriol, and Kaho?

If nothing else, this fic is starting to convert me into a Kaho-Touya fan.

... what torment is this, to watch Touya and Kaho interact each other in such a way, speaking double-languages, and leaving we the fans (of the two of them, that is) in anguish and confusion, afraid to hope that there might fate might be reversed and... what? The blush, the laugh, Oh the agony...

I am terrifically amused by how I find myself responding to how this story has progressed: When it comes to relationships, I confess that I am a conservative prude, and there is a part of me that is itching to flame this story.

But I find myself chuckling instead... perhaps it is due to the fact that the ending will justify the process of getting there.

... *eyes wide*

I do believe that was the first time I saw Ruby-Moon as a genuine character. Brilliant.