| Reviews for Tone And Stroke |
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Luciendar chapter 26 . 9/22/2018 I only have one real issue with this entire story. Consider it constructive criticism. In the beginning of the story you write that Sakura is a black belt, but you have her get man handled by Mark and Sasuke. I've taken several forms of martial arts. Most girls who track black belt are not to be fucked with. I've seen tiny girls year apart men twice their size. I'd have loved it Sakura had busted Sasuke in the mouth or at least thrown him. |
Luciendar chapter 23 . 9/22/2018 I just love how Sakura helped Naruto through his issue with his hand and now he got to repay her. I do think it would have been funny if he'd been a bit more forceful about it but still it was amazing. |
Luciendar chapter 1 . 9/22/2018 I can't believe I'm teaching this story...again. I love it. |
Bsv2 chapter 30 . 8/25/2018 Amazing story! Please keep up the good work. Can you recommend some other great narusaku stories? Thanks. |
Goldglow chapter 1 . 6/7/2018 sadly I didn't enjoy this story enough to finish it. it's so OOC and stereotypical, I mean seriously, social hierarchy, ugh. |
lucy bakers chapter 18 . 9/27/2017 Suffering from chronic disease(stroke) is a Terrible Experience that i would not even wish it for my enemy. it was terrible for my dad ,things where very bad , till i meet a herbal doctor called Dr idoko. I tried to get solution for my dad to no avail,i even tried herbs from some Herbal Doctors by communicating with them but he never received about few month ago i saw a recent post of how Dr IDOKO herbs has cured so many people and that he is a honest man to work with in the procedures on finding a cure. Then i contacted him in trial and the Herbs he Sent me got my dad Cured after two weeks.I am so happy that his is ok advice to the world please don't mind the scientific research and becareful as well, only try and also believe is herbal medicine cause most disease can be cure with is the dr,email ; best wishes ...in search to get healing. |
Michaelj chapter 30 . 6/24/2017 Where is the babymaking scene? :( |
Pl l lbh chapter 4 . 8/1/2016 TN pl |
mashiro.x.shiina chapter 30 . 11/20/2015 One of my favorite stories of yours- well done! |
fmlfavedtoomuchsmut chapter 5 . 9/22/2015 Why exactly is he being bullied? Aside from being a bit of a tool (super desperate, more then a little weird). |
St3rfire- serafina chapter 30 . 4/13/2015 Good story make a sequel for this story. I wanted them to have a baby on this story |
St3rfire- serafina chapter 1 . 4/8/2015 Good story. |
6jrz422 chapter 16 . 1/9/2015 Hey, i started reading this story of yours about two hours ago. Its been a bit hard to get into naruto after the ending... But i was getting to it... and then i read your AN... and feel like crying cause I was trying to forget that stupid ending... anyways PM me, i had an idea i'd like to run by you (actually it was an idea for a different fandom... but i think it would work well for Naruto as well... seeing as what has happened) PS. you should post a NaruSakuIno story (or NaruSakuInoHinaTen... any other girl can be appended on as well... except not karin... shes weird... and not tsunade... cause thats creepy) |
Senseye318 chapter 30 . 1/4/2015 Good job bro. Thank you for your work and time. I really like does kinda story's . And I am waiting for your new work ;) |
XxAshishxX chapter 30 . 12/24/2014 Thank you for such an awesome story. But I think you should make an epilogue to show how they managed with their children and carrers |