Yo Akhorahil the Blind Sorcerer go and fuck yourself.

Do you have anything better to do than criticize other people's stories? You got no stories on your account so you one of those I'm pissed off so I let my anger out on other people's work' type.

Deadly Haven don't listen to a asshat. You got talent and many people enjoy your stories.

You're a horrible fucking writer, J. Why do you even fanfic? You're as shit a writer as it gets. Go get a boyfriend or something. for fuck's sake. But no, bet you're too ugly to get a boyfriend. That's why you get on wikia, after all.

Short but undeniably sweet. Good job on keeping Ryuko and Mako in character for this nice one shot!:D

-K.O.B