Reviews for Of Rats and Riddles |
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Vijay Sisodia chapter 1 . 12/1/2019 He’s is manipulative but not in a bad way. But he is most definitely a super badass wizard. I love Dumbledore. |
TheFishKing chapter 1 . 4/10/2018 lame ending for a story, but it was fun and direct |
Derviano chapter 1 . 4/11/2015 Really loved this one shot. Active!Dumbledore is one of my favorite concepts on Fanfiction. A rare treat. Too bad he's just too manipulative. I read that quote in GoF too. I was surprised that he couldn't guess where he was hiding. He is quite intelligent, after all. |
Nanettez chapter 1 . 9/26/2014 That was very interesting. |
alyssialui chapter 1 . 9/25/2014 I liked it. This is what Dumbledore should have done and taken matters into his own hands while Voldemort was still weak. But I guess that would have been anticlimactic and ended the story quickly. The books are about Harry Potter not Dumbledore. As for the layout, maybe the different sections could use a line break. I know ff removed them but it could help. And if you centred the newspaper headlines that would be nice too. Other than that, I saw no SPaG errors and it was good fix. |
dracoo1894 chapter 1 . 9/25/2014 always wondered what might have happened if dumbles checked hangleton. this is probably what would happen |