Please update

I just finished this story and found it AMAZING. However, it hasn't been updated in a long time and I was wondering if you're still planning on writing a season 3a..

WOW...that's all I have to say about this chapter. It was crazy intense and emotional. I am so interested in seeing where this new path will lead our characters. cant wait to read more

Okayyyyyyy so I just spent the last 2 days binge reading this story and I don't know what to do with myself right now. I adore Charlie, she's such a badass but also has that sensitive side to her, which is nice to see especially when someone she cares about is in danger. Man I don't even know where to start with Stiles. There were some times during The Killing Moon that I was literally shouting 'JUST KISS ALREADY!' at my phone because their tension was so thick, so it's safe to say when they finally did I squealed like a child! But at this point I want to hit Stiles, I wish he realised how Charlie feels, welp my Starlie feels. My heart broke when Charlie overheard Stiles telling Lydia how he feels. My poor baby. That ending was just perfect and I'm glad you got Charlie and Derek to say goodbye and the guys watching her drive off! And damn her eyes are lavender now?! I'm literally going to be so impatient waiting for 3A but I know it'll be worth it! You're such an amazing writer and manage to get me on the edge of my seat for most of the chapters! Don't keep us waiting too long!

That ending though, gosh I hope that when Charlie returns in 3a she back to normal

awww please update soon i cant wait for season 3b *-* and drama between stiles and charlie! are you writing this story on wattpad too? or just here on ? PLEASE UPDATE SOON

I have no idea what to say AMAZING! Excellent twist to the story. Can't wait for 3a!️️️️️️️

Oh my goodness, such an amazing chapter! I eagerly await 3A :)

Okay. Coherent thoughts, complete sentences...SCREW IT AAAHHHHHHHHH. THE END. The very end the parting paragraphs oh my GOD. They're poignant and perfect and I love them. The ending is totally original, and I didn't see it coming. Who is this mysterious aunt? What's with the Delta eyes? (Legitimately how did the interaction with Gerard cause her to come into her Delta self I want to know this information)
Funniest line of the chapter "Paranormal crisis hotline, Charlie speaking". Laughing out loud, seriously. XD
I don't think I've noticed it before, but I love your dialogue. It's very realistic and natural, which is difficult for a lot of writers to achieve.
My main suggestion for this is more on technique. You could vary your sentence structure a bit more. You use the same two or three repeatedly, which can make it seem repetitive.
For example take the one of the last lines: "Lump growing in my throat, I watched them grow smaller..." the rest of the sentence is good, but see that beginning?
Unfortunately I'm not an English teacher so I don't know exactly what it's called, but I know you use that kind of beginning often, where something is happening and something else is happening at the same time. The "-ings" and the "as this happened something else happened too".
It's hard to explain, sorry. But please keep in mind this particular type of structure isn't necessarily bad- it's just a bit over used. Try to use it less and vary your sentences. Begin them differently, end them differently, rearrange them, experiment. It's all part of the craft.
While on the subject of sentences, I do love Charlie's inner monologue moments. Those concise, bleak sentences are just perfect for her inner self.
You did a very nice job on this chapter. (A few spelling mistakes) but those are my only criticisms! Honestly I was near tears half the time because of Charlie's vicious personality change. I love the Delta eyes! Same color as wolfsbane (nice symbolism) and one of the few colors they haven't used already in canon.
Oh look at that...it's midnight...
Can't wait for 3A! I just know it will be FANTASTIC.
With love, I Am The Eleventh

Listen here! This story was last updated on december 14 of 2015 and yes I can use capitalization and punctuation but I'm too tired to do so. But that is besides the point, this story is amazing and heart-wrenching so I'm going to need you to come back during spring break and finish writing the last 5-7 chapters for this season cause we're at the end and the time is now. So boom, I hope if you're having troubles you get through them and then finish this season cause Stiles is a being butt muncher.

I have a question.. Stiles didn't say anything about Charlie being locked up to Scott? I don't think he would ever do that but that's what I gathered from this.
Anyhow it has been one month and two weeks since you updated this. But you know.. It's cool, we all got a life so take as much time as you need. :)

I'm crying inside, timing on point though stiles messing with Charlie's feeling, gosh I feel bad for that gir

yes! thats what i want! i always had a thing for girls who made there guy feel guilty after they fucked up i know i am weird but seriously stiles... she was tortured and you had nothing better to do then have a little chat with lydia? but this is perfect! i really love stiles but i want him to see how much he hurted charlie and feel guilty i mean without drama it would be boring right? i hope we are still going to see it next chapter i cant wait for it!
hope you update soon

Please please continue with the story! This have been my favorite teen wolf fanfic so far, so please don't drop it

My heart just broke a little bit inside right now. I was all like yes Charlie is gonna kick ass and save Stiles and they are totally gonna admit that they love each other and kiss and stuff but this was TOTALLY better than what I was expecting...Oh my gosh this was fantastic (even the part at the end when I was like "Why?")! Cant wait to read more