It was sort of decent until you made yourself a main character.

Please don’t make Izzy and Sting and item or I will stop reading this.

Weird how Sting isn’t asking about Rigue and Lucy. Also...I called it. I knew it was Natsu. And why are they acting like Natsu is gonna kill them? I don’t get it.

I swear it’s natsu. Also how did Liszt know Lucy’s name? She never said “my name is Lucy”.

It’s all good but I still hate that mushy crap.

I wish people would stop putting...that...kind of stuff in their fanfics. I hate it.

Gross

Ur writing is spot on. Most fanfics have like at least 20 mistakes a chapter but urs has like 1-3 a chapter so that great

I think just Sting. Even though he is cocky af and soooo annoying. Rogue is okay. Btw. Most of the characters are OOC

This is very interesting because I have not read a rogue and Lucy fanfic. Please don’t put in to mush mushy crap. I just can’t get enough of all the Sabertooth fanfics. I guess I really like/hats their guild. So I glad this fanfic is soooo long.

I think it is great so far.

To ur poopy computer

From me

OMG I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! Fro is adorable but he really needs to learn a few things, lmao. I kinda wonder if Rogue got a nosebleed from it.

WHY, SHIN, WHY? COULDN'T YOU HAVE JUST LET THEM HAVE THEIR MOMENT!

Frosh: "Rogue-kun I think you're giving Lucy a little too much air."
Me: (insert death from laughing here)

Jhiwhdcbbdfibcindfuichfiuhcjnf THEY ARE SO CUTEEEEEEEEEEEEE! I SWEAR IM GOING TO EXPLODE BECAUSE OF ALL THIS CUTENESS