This is an amazing fanfic, I love it!

Bleh, I pressed enter before I finished! I was going to say you write very well and I hope you continue writing, as you are very talented at it. Also, great job in adding the relationships and drama! It feels very natural and the foreshadowing of progression with the initiation is unsettling (in a good way!). 11/10. Would Recommend!

This is such a great story. I love how you write the chapters and they are all very realistic. For being so young (12 I think you said at one point? That would make you my 14- my age as well!)

I love this story

Eric is so arrogant! Lol, maybe he's insecure, lonely and needs a hug...

It's my favorite chapter, too, so far!

This Tori chapter was really good. I like POV that is more inner dialog, not just retelling the story

This Eric chapter was good.

Eric's fears were good

Well written so far.

I stay clear of Marcus POV but yours was ok, I expected really dark, mean. Good easy read so far.

Just found your story. Sounds interesting! I like Amar too.

I like that Caleb is starting to realize who he really is. It's a shame Beatrice can't see it...

Interesting to see Eric's thoughts at this point in time.

Another great chapter! :) Good job, keep updating. I think that your chapters get better every time, but I did honestly enjoy the first few chapters.
You know, I'd really like to see a Johanna POV. You never find out much about her past, but in the books it's clear that it wasn't a happy one.