So freaking hot so far. Fuck!

I see this story was written a few yrs ago, excellent prequel I enjoyed the different points of view, so sexy, Alex in deep trying not to be too vulnerable love it. Thanks for writing.

Beautifully written! Perfect prequel showing how deep they loved each other. Very touching. Thank you for such an incredible piece of work.

The mother's voice is so similar to Alex's. I wonder if you might vary it a bit to offer the character some distinction from her daughter.

I think staring is spelled with one r. Do you mean, in the next to last line that Piper stared at Alex?

I think you are a great writer my only thing is you don't have to keep switching p.o.v.s for the same scene

Just found this story and read it all today. It's fucking amazing! It should have wayyy more reviews. Absolutely loved it, thankyou for sharing :)

This was great. Loved the back and forth PoV's. Glad there's a sequel.

Fun read. Thanks.

Well. I got to the end. I enjoyed reading this story. A very interesting point of view of flashbacks that happened. Now that you showed "the bubble" of them, I think (I do not know, is a guess) that the continuation comes the phase problems to the separation.
Please be sure to continue this story. [sorry if I wrote something wrong, was using the online translator]

This was amazing.

This was great! Read it all today!

Thanks for writing

Awesome job! I so enjoyed this!

Great story