Please, no, I can smell "Mary's" future death a mile away... that's gonna suck.

looking forward to the next chapter regardless.

Najenda would probably be stunned that not only did Tatsumi fight Esdeath, manage to cut her, but also has her romantically interested in him.

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Awesome fanfiction! Can't wait for the next chapter!

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Can't wait for the next chapter

Great job on the work! I really love how you incorporated Sayo into the mix. Honestly, I'm also rooting for Tatsumi x Sayo and cant wait to see what her secret is. Thanks for making my day with your story!

Tatsumi's character is one of the few things I wasn't too sure how I felt about but this chapter dealt with him really well.

Interesting direction. I like it

Dang bro I feel bad for Mary but then again I felt bad for all the innocent girls in Akame Ga Kill that had the misfortune to encounter the many rapist and pedo pigs of that world

Nice

I starting to like this Mary character lmao XD!

Oh damn I like Mary like "yoooo! That was awesome"

I uh... I dunno what to think about this fanfic, on one hand it’s an amazing idea and the setup works well with the limited history we know of. On the other hand as soon as Sayo was introduced things went all kinds of sideways.

As far as I can see Sayo has no place in the story that makes any damn sense except maybe another person pining after Tatsumi or your own amusement. Granted I don’t doubt you as the author have a plan for all of that but as a reader I feel like a lot f chapters are just fillers now so you can write more mind games with Sayo.

It’s not really enjoyable anymore to see considering it has no actual direction, it’s just random chapters where they do stuff so Sayo and fuck with Tatsumi

How many chapters in this story? It’s not bad but I don’t care for because he keeps bring ay the mercy of someone