Love it. Simply adorable. It works perfectly fine at the end.

I cried a lot through the story but it was really good

I was not expecting the twist at the end. Well done

Simply put, this was freakin BEAUTIFUL! One of the best fics I've read.

OH MY GOD THIS WAS SOOOOO GOOD!

I would LOVE to see this one-shot turned into a full, multi-chapter story :D really! You wrote so many ideas here about what would Natsu do for Lucy, it just begs for more details and if you add some more interesting things there and there... well, what you say? :P

This was so beautiful and It made me cry. T.T BEAUTIFUL!

I enjoyed this story immensely.

Damn I was crying like a little kid! I loved that fanfiction. This one shot with a combination of a sad soundtack will make evryones heart melt in seconds! Write more like this one. Thank you!

that was amazing loved that stile a lot hope to read more of your work

can you make a sequel but in Lucy's eyes?

I almost cried but I couldn't because I'm with my family so it would seem a little weird if they heard crying

Holy shit, I started crying and that doesn't happen too often! This was so absolutely amazing, all those feels, it was wesome! I was so painfully beatiful T_T
That was truly amazing.

I cried. I felt Natsu's endless sadness, Hell I even thought he was gonna die ! But no, you offered him a very cute happy end. Thank uou for that wonderful story :)

it's actually pretty good ! :)