so hot...

I really liked this, are you going to continue this? It should be a really good story.

No this is a wonderful bit of lemony goodness. It was very well written from beginning to end. I wasn't even surprised that this turned essentially turned into a display of dominance and love. Though I was still left curious as to what exactly happened with that Hime. Did she sneak into his room and throw herself at him? I'm rather surprised he didn't end her for such an action.

~what a lucky girl~keep up the great writing. c'ya'

Bueno eso fue caliente.
Lo único que me molesta es que esa home salió de la habitación privada de él. un sitio que en primera no debería haber podido entrar sin autorización. Él dijo que ella intento seducirlo pero no funcionó. Estás por emparejarse y dejas que otra mujer te seduzca y te toque ( ambos tenían la ropa desarreglada) . Deberías haberla parado en seco antes de todo estás por emparejarse guapo. Así que eso no estuvo bien.
Si estuvo muy lindo con kagome , perooo ... Esperemos que le sea fiel durante los años.

clean up in aisle 10!... i mean mop, towels whatever you can grab... and while you at it grab some ice ... cause DAAAAAAAMMMMMMMNNNNN! that was so hot that put a volcano to shame!

Hot hot hot!

Very well written

wooooooooooooooooow. hot!

Awesome! I love it :)

Very nice! :)

So what did happen with that other hime?

WOW!