woah

Allen is the epitome of "hello darkness my old friend"

also the imagery with the flower petals was pretty nice good job

Loved it. It's really allen's thought and personality. Thank you.

This is really good! I really liked all of your descriptions. Is there going to be any more of this, or are you just leaving it as is? (Just wondering, because it's not marked as complete though it works perfectly as a standalone.)

I really like this! Then again, I seem to love hearing about my favorite character's suffering. It sounds horrible, but I think it gives character to stories. Allen Walker and Eren Jaeger just happen to be my favorite characters to read about because they have so much character buildup. I don't know if you've seen Shingeki No Kyojin or if it is even something you would like, but that and D. Gray Man are tied for my favorites.

That was truly amazing. A few spacings needed during one part - the one that was pretty much a whole block of a summary.
Other than that, it was quite the story!