| Reviews for New Paradise Island |
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   catze86 chapter 9 . 7/7 awesome bro. cant wait the lemon. Tina is bae |
| AJGuardian chapter 9 . 7/5 Okay. This is some great teasing. |
| Re Lovely Lover chapter 9 . 7/5 Very, very well done. |
| Ryu wolf chapter 9 . 7/5 Awesome job with this chapter nicely done |
| spanky1988.awj chapter 9 . 7/5 Can't wait for chapter 10 and 11! |
| Dasgun chapter 9 . 7/5 .. |
| StrongGuy159 chapter 9 . 7/5 Cool chapter continue please. |
| EternalKing chapter 8 . 6/20 Bruh you make a DOA crossover for lemons and have the chapters ain’t even any of them being fucked? This fic did not age well in the slightest lmao |
| Re Lovely Lover chapter 3 . 4/13 Eh... no. This one definitely can't compare to the Maken-ki story. The lines with the slut and such. Just no. I also hate the use of the word babe which I could shrug off in the other more recent story but with the lones and way this chapter was I couldnt help being irritated. Definitely improved in the other one. |
| Borello chapter 8 . 4/5 nice work |
| kage88 chapter 6 . 4/5 brilliant |
| kage88 chapter 5 . 4/5 love it |
| kage88 chapter 1 . 4/5 i really like the idea |
| Ryu wolf chapter 8 . 4/4 Nice job with this chapter |
| StrongGuy159 chapter 8 . 4/4 Awesome chapter continue please. |
