Reviews for Adhæsit
nemisis chapter 18 . 9/20
pls continue
Guest chapter 18 . 9/3
Continue
Guest chapter 6 . 9/3
"Fuck you" Bruce is not like that to Alfred? And this is Young Justice is for kids, ever wonder why Season 3 is bad?
Guest chapter 3 . 9/3
I really hate Zatanna. One of the reason I chose to read this story because it said no pairing Robin
Guest chapter 18 . 4/9
continue with the story that's my advice.
BigFan chapter 18 . 2/22
Please continue! I know it has been a while and you have probably forgotten about this, but I love this story and would greatly enjoy it if you keep going, either through direct continuation or a rewrite.
Hallowed rook chapter 6 . 5/27/2019
Sassy Alfred best Alfred
warangel03061995 chapter 2 . 3/30/2019
Dick you do have a thing for red heads
Lily jr chapter 18 . 2/21/2019
HI!
This is a very amazing fanfiction and I think you should continue
Hayoen chapter 16 . 1/17/2019
I’m going to say this author really doesn’t like Zatanna... to which I am very sad because I ship Chalant. Oh well, at least it’s not Dibs
Guest chapter 18 . 9/25/2018
Write more
flufferiferous chapter 18 . 6/30/2018
I'd read a re-write!
Amelia-Williams-Pond chapter 18 . 6/26/2018
Can I make the suggestion to do both? When inspiration strikes, work on current chapters, and when it doesn't, rewrite previous ones? An additional suggestion for the rewrite if you choose: some of your plot points are a little shaky. I get that, I have the same stuff going on in a lot of my past writing, but the biggest one for me is the team being listed as Wayne Foundation Scholars during their short stint at GA. What if instead, it was arranged to look like a brief exchange program, in which students from various schools switched places in an effort to increase understanding about the gap between high-society and conventional education? (On paper to try and make the rich kids appreciate and understand their wealth and to give the 'deserving' not rich kids a chance to experience private education at no cost, just for a little while.) A social experiment, as it were. Something of the magnitude of that many students suddenly getting scholarships in the middle of the year would cause a media stir, and when those kids all left a little while later would cause another, larger stir. An indefinite exchange program, however, would provide a plausible explanation, especially if it was run by none other than Bruce Wayne himself. It would also give the team a plausible explanation for staying at Wayne Manor during that time. I've got a couple other suggestions, if you'd like to hear them, feel free to PM me. I highly enjoy this story and I look forward to seeing it continued, even if we have to wait for you to rework the story as it stands so far. Happy writing!
Cremetome chapter 1 . 3/23/2018
I believe either way you chose is good
KK chapter 1 . 2/10/2018
Actually... I don't get the premise. Why do they want to kill some rich kid? The only way it would benefit anyone is if A) they would become Bruce's heir or get a portion of the money if Dick died, B) they were going to be the heir or get a portion of the money before Dick came around and wanted revenge, C) Bruce was using his money and situation to either do good or piss someone/s off who now wanted revenge by killing his adopted son, but even then that has less to do with his money and more to do with his connection to Bruce.
Some basic changes that would make sense to the story:
* Bruce used his political clout and fortune to do something that hurt a criminal empire or helped fund the police dept. or something which made the criminals want to make him pay, by killing the kid that Bruce is so attached to.
* The attempts are made to kill Dick but rather to kidnap him and ransom him for money, after all you can't ransom a corpse. (Or you can but with lower returns)
*It's specifically one of Batman's villains who want to hit him where it hurts or thinks that Robin is interfearing somehow.

I'm not saying your story is bad, just that your foundation is a bit shakey.
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