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   Everlastingdreamshop chapter 11 . 12/29/2018 Sad. But it was such an interesting perspective to see! Kili’s reasons why he did things and the whole language barrier. You described it so well, I loved it. Thanks for taking the time to share this with us! |
| sorrellkaren chapter 11 . 2/20/2015 This was brilliant. You can write a mentally disturbed Kili so well it is chilling. I have read your other stories so I understood what was going on here. Some of the images were disturbing to say the least and you might want to put a warning at the beginning of some chapters. I feel the weak at heart would have trouble with some of these torcher images. Great writing as usual and oh so angst. |
| parisindy chapter 11 . 2/13/2015 Gahhhh so freaking good! I seriously can not gush enough about this story! |
| BookwormInFrance chapter 11 . 2/13/2015 Even though I already knew the outcome, this chapter was still stressful as hell. Well done! Congrats on managing to tell the same story twice while pulling off the difficult task of avoiding repetition. I really hope you keep going til the end. I look forwards to reading more about Kili's emotional development. Poor thing... He just needs a hug :( |
| dojoson41 chapter 11 . 2/12/2015 he just needs a huggy. |
| kingleby chapter 11 . 2/12/2015 You keep breaking my heart with Kili! So amazing to see his point of view on everything. I loved how Bilbo patting him set him at ease a bit. I'd love to see the other parts of Long Forgotten Gold in his point of view too *puppy dog eyes* I'm dying to know when Kili finally (if ever) accepts he's really a dwarf and Fili's brother or not. Amazing as always! |
| Karasmaname chapter 11 . 2/12/2015 is there gonna be more? because i love this. |
| Celebrisilweth chapter 11 . 2/12/2015 I have really enjoyed this story from Kili's view. Sorry it's over. |
| Booksnake3 chapter 11 . 2/12/2015 Amazing chapter! I'm so emotionally invested in this universe it's untrue! Oh Kili, almost there! Poor thing :( he's so confused! But at least I know it turns out all right in the end :D |
| yshxf chapter 11 . 2/12/2015 Like! I've really enjoyed your style with this set, i must say. Going to miss it. It's funny how it makes me flip back to the original tale to re-read it. |
| The Ink Spiller chapter 10 . 1/13/2015 This is much good, please continue soooon. I especially enjoyed Kili's perspective when compared to the chapter in Long Forgotten Gold. |
| parisindy chapter 10 . 1/13/2015 Gads I am just enjoying every second of this! |
| Hathien Elebriwien Ranor chapter 10 . 1/12/2015 You're breaking my heart. Well done. |
| kingleby chapter 10 . 1/12/2015 Was interesting to see what Kili was dreaming about. Poor guy, he keeps breaking my heart! Amazing chapter as always. |
| Eryndil chapter 10 . 1/12/2015 Although I know what's going to happen, I'm still really impatient for the next chapter! Once again, this is a fascinating view of events through Kili's eyes. |
