alright you made it in my top 5 authors.
we got the same humor, you write the story's to leave enough to the imagination without to degrade in smut.
you write about woman with more respect and dignity than most even wen it's a harem story, we all know this is fantasy because even me doesn't want to end up with 13 woman, it would be a nightmare even with stamina potions.

love how Ron ends up!

Great story!

Alright, the numbers.
Potters: 10 (Hermione, Parvati, Padma, Luna, Susan, Hannah, Astoria, Daphne, Gabrielle, Fleur)
Longbottoms: 3 (Ginny, Vane, Lavender)
Ron: 7-13 (Starter and backup teams, minus Ron himself)
Hagrid: 1 (Maxime)
Bill: 2 (presumed to be at least french, if not part Veela)

Since you added two unknown women to the list of Harry's wives, and you don't mention Remus, I'm going to add Nymphadora Tonks and Katie Bell as Harry's two unnamed wives. They are the only two unlisted women who I consider close enough to Harry to fill those spots. That, and we all know Remus is a gutless coward.

The longest smile I ever had.

Took a turn I hadn't expected. I assumed Hermione would be with him alone, but this was even more fun to read this way. And a sweet ending. Loved it.

The part where you had Fleur say that she loved Bill, you should have said that she liked Bill. Seriously, she cries in what I assume is embarrassment or sadness that she is not a virgin any longer, and later goes on to imply to the reader that whilst they were in fact dating, they were not that close.

Other than that gripe, I really like this story.

Wait, twelve? You only mentioned ten: Hermione, Parvati, Padma, Luna, Susan, Hannah, Astoria, Daphne, Gabrielle and Fleur. That's ten, not twelve. Harry even said there were only nine girls, not counting Fleur, who was having a little pity party over letting Bill or some other guy get to her before Harry.

At one spot it said ten girls than it said 12. I'm pretty sure you meant ten though. All his wives had their own family name to give their kids. Hermitage would give her kids the name potter. There's 2 greengrass, 2 delacur and 2 pitel. Unless he has black, pevrelle and maybe another name to pass on as well. Wish we knew that info.

I'm wondering how he went from 10 wives to 12, but other than that I liked this story.

Great story

nice and fun read

Fun story and thanks for sharing!

This is great

Nice story...

Thank you for sharing this story with us.