Reviews for Harmony
Spidey-phd chapter 9 . 6/24
Harry: Orphaned. Neglected and abused throughout childhood. International fame (with all the negatives of public spotlight). Multiple traumatic near-death experiences every year. Tortured and persecuted by government officials, political figures, and teachers. Target of a obsessed supernatural terrorist and his band of sadistic thugs. Fugitive. War. Multiple loved ones murdered or died in combat. Again betrayed by leaders. Kidnapped, enslaved, repeated and prolonged physical, sexual, and emotional assault. Desperate escape. Refugee, financial desperation, severe PTSD.

Peer, "I can't take it anymore. I think my boyfriend might be looking at another girl. I think I'm going to kill myself!"

Harry, "I can see how that would be overwhelming. "

Writing suggestion: comedy is best with a straight man. Drama is best with someone who isn't in crises (or at least alternate). Either Harry should fake enough maturity and wisdom to stabalize her friends or some one in het new group of friends needs to do it for her. Otherwise, realistically, Harry is going to go Carrie on the school of dumb immature self-obsessed teenagers the next time the erupt into another hormonal squabble.

Glee seems to have offered Harry some catharsis through music but the girl is a bubbling volcano unless someone intervenes.
Spidey-phd chapter 1 . 6/24
But the Malfoys are really kind and gentle on the inside! They're not the kind to intentionally kill children, have a dungeon in their basement, or willingly support magical Hitler! The Malfoys are much better than a know-it-all like Granger or those brash and uncultured Weasleys! If only Harry had fallen in love with that deliciously handsome Voldermort or that poor misunderstood Snape then everything would have worked out.
difficultone92 chapter 9 . 5/1
Love it cant wait for more!
Rori Potter chapter 9 . 5/1
Oh my. Wow. Update soon.
Pygmy Hippo chapter 9 . 5/1
Very fun :) Hope you and yours are able to stay safe with all the craziness going on
icyquest4 chapter 9 . 4/30
Love this! So happy you updated! When is Harry going to hang with puck or meet burt?
sammyfox chapter 9 . 4/30
Love it
Malecwolf chapter 8 . 11/3/2018
Please update
Littleheartache chapter 8 . 2/1/2018
THis is a really different and interesting Harry Potter/Glee Fic !
I simple can not wait to read more, please update soon!
Littleheartache
lalaith1694 chapter 8 . 1/29/2018
thank you,I think your story is very interesting and I am very glad you posted this chapter. I hope you will continue to write it and post it.
Pygmy Hippo chapter 8 . 1/27/2018
I loved it! Happy to see you’re feeling up to writing. I hope things keep looking up for you
megipegi chapter 8 . 1/27/2018
Great chapter, thank you for the update and I cannot wait for the next one!
Shadow Wolf 15846 chapter 8 . 1/25/2018
Nice! Though I’m curious as to what happened in the wizarding world when harry vanished?
icyquest4 chapter 8 . 1/24/2018
Hi! I am so excited you updated! This chapter was amazing and I can't wait to see what happens next :)
DeathNoteMaker chapter 1 . 1/24/2018
If she wanted to not be noticed, why would she join a Glee club? A club that is literally begging for attention, seeing as they perform. That doesn't make sense. I didn't even place on getting into how ridiculous the overall premise of this story is seeing it honestly speaks for itself. There was no way that the Malfoys would have the ability to get away with any of this, especially not if she is the Savior of Magical Britian for the second time.

However, I guess for the sake of convenience so this nonsensical plot is able to happen, it was necessary.

Hell, it would've made more sense if the Malfoys attempted this kind of thing using the life debt that Harry unintentionally gained when Narcissa didn't rat him (her in this case) out to Voldemort. Of course, he then testified for them and kept them from Azkaban, which seemed to be enough. However, seeing as that didn't happen here, I find it hard to believe this was able to happen.

Whatever, though. This kind of story isn't my cup of tea, from the straight nonsense that it's trying to convince me to suspend my disbelief for to whatever you made her think joining a Glee club in the future would hide her from pursuers. So, I don't plan on reading it further.

Wish you luck on the rest of this, I guess.
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