Curse tou author! You leave me hanging here! Hahaha just plss do continue tghis first I hesitate to read this because the story is too long I mean to many I find it interesting hahaha

Where is the finaaaaal please release it! Huhu

One simple critique and author person went MIA. Almost 2 years since the "incident" and he/she stopped this fanfic. Watta immature person.

”...The girls knew their mother was a very important person in the criminal world, but this exceeded all of their expectations.”
This story is seriously fucked up - I simply can't take it seriously.
Somewhat entertaining though in it's absurdity and cartoonish exaggerations.

The last update is dec2016 and that was 2 years ago. I understand that you have your life but 2 years of waiting for us readers to read the final chapter is a bit too long. Don't you think so?

hello, it is 2018, still no update, pls write if you have time

Please don't leave it hanging...finish it please

Where the hell are you? Please finish this awesome story (T︵T) I beg you author-san...

I love everything about this fic. I thought Natsuki died but all hail Lord Kruger is alive! Shizuru going berserk was very fitting. Ugh, also the Kruger children are all loveable, I just thought Layla was more deserving of Namiko tbh. Anyway, Reagan was cool af. Loved all your OCs and the inclusion of the Nanoha cast lol.

update please

Update ... Update please

next chapter please

next chapter please

Next please!

Greetings! Wow...I love the Shiz, Nat, and the kids and Reagan are alive. I hated the last chapter that Namiko was able to get out of getting raped. Urgh...I hate people who uses rape to feel in control.

Amazing journey and story. I do hope to read the next chapter 62 from you soon! Thank you for not abandoning your fics. It takes a while but as a reader, I'm glad that you are still determined to write and complete your fics.

Many thanks and take care!