Not the greatest chapter. This would never be allowed to happen in ICU. Besides nobody but family is allowed and when a person is in this bad shape only one person at a time would be allowed in. Also a Doctor would never tell their patient that they should be dead because of the shape they were in. They also knew that Piper kept asking for Alex, who was obviously very important to her, so she very likely would definitely be allowed in. Hearing voice that's so familiar and you really care about can help bring a person out of a coma. So much is wrong with this chapter.

It was pretty easy to tell that Piper was in a coma. Some one at the morgue would not be dreaming.

Piper is so self-centered and so weak, never accepting any of the blame. . I hope Alex doesn't accept her back easily. She needs to finally realize what type of person she really is and that the world doesn't revolve around her alone.

No, it is NOT trash! I don’t believe that you are 15. Your writing is too good! Your style and vocabulary, besides an encompassing storyline do not resemble those of a High School student. I’m wondering if you’ve written any original stories. Keep it up!

loved it..i hope someday you will write another vauseman story.. Cheers

This fanfic isn't about prison so why does it have to be so: "fuck me this fuck me that". You could've kept it classier.

This is a fucking brilliant story, the banter you write is spot on for these two, never want it to end, just like the series. I know we are sad bastards but I just love reading fan fic and dream that it would be real life, sigh.

Wait, so it an an R8 or ASTON MARTIN

This was fantastic. All the heart eyes!

I loved this Vausman story. It was beautiful. Thank u thank u thank u.

I have faith that you will come back...soon
This story is too amazing to be abandoned!

You are gifted in writing. Thank you very much for producing such a lovely vauseman story. It is delightful and very enjoyable to read. Wish you every success in life. Take care!

heart breaking, man! piper is really a runner and an unbelievably selfish one. damn!

definitely a good chapter. the flow is smooth and it keeps drawing you in. love your writing style, so lively!

This story is brilliant! I just found it today by chance. Lucky me!
The plot development is interesting. The banter is hilarious. You are an amazing writer.