Reviews for Resilience |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You're done? Ok, you ended it at a very good point. I hope there's a sequel to this one, too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. My. This chapter is amazing, too, especially the talk about tears, and how Snape could not cry for so very long. And letting Harry weep all he wanted. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing chapter, I love this-how Snape would bleed for Harry, and unbends his pride long enough to ask for help; that was the hardest thing he did, I think. (surprised he did not try the spell he used to save Draco, but oh well). |
![]() ![]() ![]() So you are combining both second and third years, got it. And Snape would know that Dobby was a Malfoy elf. Love how Remus pretends to be nice to Snape, but we all know how he really feels. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Funny how Minerva doesn't have time for Harry, but assumes that Snape does. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter. Ok, this is third year, then, though I remember the sleeping in the hall bit happened in second year. But I'm watching Prisoner of Azkaban right now... |
![]() ![]() The ending would have been quite good if you had put this note at the bottom of ch. 41 instead of making it the whole of ch. 42. It was only a crashing disappointment because of the implicit promise of another chapter - since there ~were~ 42 chapters. You didn't even insert "The End" or the pretentious "Fin" or "Finis" at the bottom of ch. 41! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nicely done! A clever twist, to move up the events of Harry's third year this way - his protectors in canon are lucky that he usually only had one threatening mystery per school year going on... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I general i really love your story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it kind of. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gosh generally i comment in english but... Molly es tan metida, rayos y centellas. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Huh. This seems like a mixture of both second and third years. Plus, Severus is a half-blood and McGonagall doesn't know this? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, this is actually second year. I do wish Harry would tell Snape what's going on, it's pretty clear he's hiding something. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, we are in third year, then, with the Dementors showing up (surprised that Lupin didn't run to the infirmary and try to take over). And yes, Oliver Wood should have stopped the match with his prize Seeker in danger. Apparently winning is ok no matter who gets hurt. I do hope that Snape has time to look after some of this Slytherins, too-after all, Dementors could easily affect them as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it thanks for sharing this story |