| Reviews for I Can't Unlove You |
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   Kristie20 chapter 54 . 10/9 This was amazing and a wonderful read! Thanks for sharing... |
| Kksmum chapter 36 . 7/29 Am loving it. Its 2.30am and I cannot put it down. |
| Guest chapter 9 . 3/9 Weather isn't awful on coastal California, but I wouldn't consider the Bay Area the same as LA/San Diego. Those areas get a lot more sunny than the SF/Bay Area. |
| ChrisDGoosey chapter 54 . 1/1 I loved this, thank you so much. You really write good, strong, intelligent and sassy female characters. Clever stuff. |
| ChrisDGoosey chapter 48 . 1/1 I have never been so glad that I am not reading this as a WIP! |
| ChrisDGoosey chapter 43 . 1/1 That was easier than expected! |
| ChrisDGoosey chapter 42 . 1/1 Hilarious chapter, I loved it. A.J. is a star. I would, however, like to respond to the review you included at the begging of this chapter and whether or not Bella was justified in blaming Edward for her state of mind when he left. I think we need to remember that she was very young and she had given herself completely to Edward. For Edward to then say what he did, I think it was bound to destroy her as she didn’t have the resilience that experience and maturity install. Interesting review though. |
| ChrisDGoosey chapter 41 . 1/1 Why does it seem right when Charlie interferes but not Esme? Is it just clever writing? Anyway, the two should get together; Tanya wouldn’t stand a chance. I’m not usually a fan of different POV beyond Edward and Bella but you have used them effectively to really give more insight to the characters and to help the story along. For instance, we now know that Charlie has noticed the way James looks at Leah. This is good stuff! |
| ChrisDGoosey chapter 39 . 1/1 Thank you. I now have hope that James will be ok |
| ChrisDGoosey chapter 38 . 1/1 Manipulative Esme is just nasty. I don’t care so much for Tanya anymore but what about James? He doesn’t deserve this- but wouldn’t it be boring if you wrote fluff and no angst? |
| ChrisDGoosey chapter 35 . 1/1 As I’ve been reading this I’ve been surprised at the level of hate you say your reviewers have for Edward as apart from one or two scenes, I haven’t found him that bad. Then I read your AN at the start of this chapter and guess what fic I revisited over Christmas- Hit by Destiny - so maybe that explains it. LOL! |
| ChrisDGoosey chapter 34 . 1/1 Yep, you were right - Doucheward ...but the conversation with A.J. and your final paragraph saved it (and him). |
| ChrisDGoosey chapter 22 . 1/1 Oh No! Tanya is nice! |
| ChrisDGoosey chapter 19 . 1/1 I like that you not only provided a good reason for Edward and his family leaving suddenly but also gave it a “to protect her” angle. |
| ChrisDGoosey chapter 18 . 1/1 Yep, I knew you would manage to give a solid backstory to Edward’ Departure. This story is developing into a first class fic. Thank you. |
