This is amazing! I liked "Two Broken Hearts" by a really small margin because I really enjoyed every moment of Ash and Dawn's character and romance development. But nonetheless, this is a really well done story, too!

I think you ended the story very well. You provided glimpses into the future lives of the characters and ended it on an optimistic note. It leaves me wondering what could happen next, even when I know there isn't going to be a third part. It's a little sad to see it end, but I think it has an ending that was well deserved. It's actually hard for me to decide which story is better: the first one or this. I think they were both well written and done correctly. Great work on this saga!

However, I know I have suggested, for a long time, having Trey and the Aura victims revived by the end, but I can see you ended up choosing not to do so. I am disappointed and saddened to be honest, but in the end, I respect your decision. Good luck on your future stories.

Awesome

Wow I've been following the characters in this story since "Two Broken Hearts" and I can't believe it's all over now. You did a great job with both stories! Personally I liked "Two Broken Hearts" better just because it's what got me invested in the characters and I liked seeing Ash and Dawn fall in love for the first time. But both stories were awesome in their respective rights. Well this is now the end... :(

i think it was a bit dark in some parts but over all, i think it was a little bit better than two broken hearts which i think is already at the j. standard

Having the kids go on their own journeys was a great way to end an awesome story! Though I'd be lying if I said I wasn't just a little disappointed that there won't be a story focusing on the kids (mainly Alex and Grace, hehe.) Still, you're an awesome writer, and I look forward to seeing what you come up with next!

Well done. This story was long but the end was worth it.

An awesome way to finish this story! Thank you so much for writing this story and Merry Christmas!

OMG I love this story and the other story so much! please make another story of this I want to see more Ash and Dawn moments, i especially want them to have a baby too

Please update

For the next chapter you could make a moment between ash and dawn like at the end of chapter 17 of two broken hearts when they decide to have a baby, really hope you update soon.

Can you finish this before you update Escaped. You are doing good just have one more chapter left. Thanks!

I think you should do a flash forward where The Kids are Married with Children. Alex is Married to Grace, Julia is married to Jake, Sarah is Married to Anthony, Alan is Married to Isla who forgives them for her brothers death. Or where the Kids get together with their crushes. Anyway you wanna do this, I'll be fine with. )

hey, i love this story, i just really hope you can do me and other people a favour:
do a sequel to hunted down please. make ash and dawn have a really romantic relationship and give ash the powers of time and space. you could have ash dawn and friends hunting down monsters that try to destroy the world.
please do it, for ever pearlshipper out there

I don't understand how Isla's right, it wasn't Alex & Julia who did it, they didn't lay a finger on him, Team Rocket did it all, so she needs to blame them, and besides, Alex and Julia just got better, and she screamed at them and ended their friendship. Anyway, Alan needs to talk to her, because I don't think she hates him, just Alex & Julia(For Some Reason.) This is something I have been thinking about since I read this an hour after you updated. Keep up the good work. )