You really hate Rheagar and Robert, don't you? Although the former was foolish, idiotic and mad, he was no rapist. And he most certainly wouldn't rape Lyanna while she carried his child and risked his Visenya's life-that makes no sense. And Robert just wandered the streets, drunk and alone, and decided rape a woman and not pay her? He always paid-he's the king. Your OC Bethany is boring-she's too perfect. She's pretty, good at everything, everyone loves her etc. It appears she's there to be Arthur's love interest. Why should I, as your reader, care about an OC and a blank slate character like Arthur? The story is pretty much about them, or used to be, until you switched to POVs. Don't get me wrong, I love the initial idea, but your unfounded distaste for certain characters is off-putting. there were several men taking care of Targaryans, and none managed to raise Viserys properly? And Ned Stark just announced Jon's existence to his lords? The story would have spread in an instant-someone gets drunk and reveals the secret. I loved certain parts of this fanfic-Jon and Dany as children are precious. The Stark family is very nicely done. But you are so biased against some characters, and others are lauded for no good reason. This is not how you write a great story, authors should let their readers decide who's good and who's bad, and you can't do that if your characters are one dimensional.

Wtf ? THREE years without an update ? ,! .?

Arianne needs to get a firm hand on the Sand Snakes as she can better then anyone recognize the danger they pose. And must know just how above her station Elleria is behaving.! Elleria thinks of herself as being equal to a true-born Lady when she is in all honesty just a favored whore. Lime the mid-eastern peoples ( of before islam ) they are patterned after these women are dangerous, violent anf not above murder when angered. The Princess needs to confront her father and set him straight about what she will refuse to become a willing part of.! I hate the idea but I fear Doran needs to die, and maybe Oberyn as well if he rebels against her authority once she sits the Dornish throne. If she imprisons O she must kill Elleria and the Sand Snakes before they kill her.

Ice is Valarian steel.! It Never needs a wet stone ! Ned only oiled it after washing the blood off.!

I hated that they left out Arrianne and Quenton in the show almost as much as I hated them leaving out Willas Tyrell, and Garlen and his wife. The storiey loses So much by cutting down on the cast that way ! ( I much prefered the origional Dario too.! )

While I understand how hard it would be to kill V. Only a fool ould allow such a dangerous man to live.! That he is insane only makes that mistake worse !

Write more soon please.

its been 3 years. rip

Are you going to continue this?

please update,,, hope u wont abandoned this story cause this one should have a great plot. Prospect of the north are gang up against southern politics. Arthur Dayne as one of main character. So please update ...

Sucks that you haven't updated in a year. This story is one of my favorites right now because I have never seen a story where it goes in depth of Jon's childhood with the Kingsguard and how they thought about Rhaegar's actions. Damn was hoping this would be a Jon/Arianne because there aren't many stories of them together out there. Hope you update soon.

Really liked this story until this chapter. Of course you left Visery's alive for plot convenience. Like are you fucking kidding me, Viserys got Oswell and Gerold killed and Arthur lets him go like a dumbass and Viserys is probably gonna hurt Jon or Daenerys in the future or get Arthur or Bethany killed some dumb crap like that. Really disappointed in this story right now .

Fantastic chapters :D

I AM ABSOLUTELY IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY! I know that it's been a while but I hope that you update this, I would just LOVE to see how the story would flow

nice fict