Reviews for Darth Lelouch
winxfan808 chapter 4 . 4/3/2015
no worries, we all know how life can be distracting a lot of the time right? XD but looking forward to the new chapter, I eagerly await it. :)
Command Unit chapter 4 . 4/1/2015
its a really good fanfic i was dissapointed with this "April fools" chapter...please dont do that
Lord Mortensen chapter 4 . 4/1/2015
ok, we wait for you! please update soon thi fic!
tf330129 chapter 3 . 12/24/2014
good story keep it up
TheRabbidRabbit chapter 2 . 10/2/2014
This story is quite interesting... If you would like, i could be a Co-writer to this story
Geasszero chapter 3 . 9/28/2014
hope to see this fic as follows.
please update soon I hope to see as follows
winxfan808 chapter 3 . 9/28/2014
I find your story very intriguing, and honestly, it seems a lot more interesting than the stories on the code geass/ star wars cross over page. This new alternate version of a force/light saber wielding sith Lelouch is a very amusing idea, he probably would have the rage for it, and I can't wait to see how her turns out (on a personal note, even though Darth Shien did train him to use a light saber, I would think that he would be more of the inquisitor type [and on to the sith sorcerer type] who can use light sabers, but are more inclined to use the force as their tools and weapons while the light saber is a back up and general use or specific tasks)

My questions about the fic for critique: 1. in the Clovis scene, it kind of confused me with the blood, would not the light saber melt the severed veins making so there is not blood spill? and 2. Clovis seemed to have a believable reaction to the light saber, but Kallen seemed to just think of it as a normal weapon, why would she not be more astounded by such an advanced and strange weapon?

My questions for the story in general (just ideas to help with the story or clarification): would Nunnaly interfering with Lelouch's rage and passion or increasing it, affecting how he can control his dark side of the force? Is Darth Shien and oc of yours or is he actually from star wars lore? and now that Darth Shien died the same year as when the show is, as with tradition of the sith, will Lelouch choose a new name for him self (like how the emperor form the original trilogy was named Palpatine, but his sith name was Darth Sidious), or will Zero be the new sith Lelouch? and or will he take the mantle of "Darth"?

I am very exited to see what comes next, and look forward to your next chapter.
P.S. I my self had a few ideas about connecting code geass and the force, if you are interested PM me and I can share my ideas with you that you might add into the story since you seem to already be making a good one.
Sennybee98 chapter 3 . 9/26/2014
Can Lelouch cut down knightmares with the lightsaber? If so that would be awesome.
It also looks like Lelouch doesn't need a geass since he can use the mind trick and C.C got killed anyway.
However, what I would like to ask is; Will Lelouch learn to use other forces such as pushing, choking and lightning?
Lord Mortensen chapter 3 . 9/25/2014
Cool! Lelouch gona have the geas? please update soon!
hiro hiro chapter 2 . 9/21/2014
I like this chapter, I would like to return to lelouch empire and from empire to conquer the world
hiro hiro chapter 1 . 9/21/2014
I like the beginning
Lord Mortensen chapter 2 . 9/23/2014
FAN-FUCKING-TASTIC! please update soon!
Geasszero chapter 2 . 9/22/2014
great lelouch then used to Clovis to conquer the world to the public then appear (leloch britania returns form an army and conquer)
Geasszero chapter 1 . 9/22/2014
good start
matronium chapter 2 . 9/21/2014
try to find a pre reader it will help you out a lot. just a friendly tip from a fellow beginner.