I admit I was tempted to quit a few times. I don't like drama/tragedy depictions. But I was really curious about how everything would unfold. And I actually loved it!
I specially loved the "blue" nickname! Loved it 100% and Bella's brother... when she thought of him as familiar I thought he would be a forgotten cousin or some relative like that, but I actually loved that he was her big brother. And it was so funny that Charlie and Renee found their way back to each other. It's very cute

okay obviously they're all off their rockers except Jasper. and Rose has her moments lol
but also wtf is Carlisle on about with wolf DNA injections? I imagine the hospital would have taken care of him well enough so Carlisle has ulterior motives of some sort

hmmmmmm maybe I wasnt too far off about Rachel. I didnt think about her being in Edward's pocket until Jakr called Paul and Paul started noticing her expensive stuff. so she was probably a distraction for more than just breaking Paul and Bella up. Rachel clearly doesnt knpw the baby was taken but she may have had more than one purpose to Edward

lol whoops I was wrong it is Rachel texting Paul xD but I'm still sure that Aaron is alive

obviously someone stole their baby lol bren thinking it since they told Paul he was stillborn and even more now that it's clear Bella and Paul both thing the other made the cremation decision. if they'd just talk they could connect some things like that and realize it doesnt add up!
also I really doubt Rachel is texting Paul. my guess is that its whoever took the baby. who that is, I cant figure out yet. I suspected Carlisle, but I see no reason for him to take their baby so idk

You did it again! I saw how many chapters this fic was and nearly balked. This was another tear jerker that kept me spellbound. I have never before flung my phone away while reading fan fiction. But, I really did! I was actually sobbing during the emergency delivery. This certainly was a roller coaster ride. You really did a great job of softening Paul’s rough exterior with Bella. I really appreciated the HEA. Jake may not have his mate, but he is certainly content with his life. Amazing job!

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It’s really interesting how AU you went with Edwards character. He never did speak like a prissy character from the Regency period in England. And way to exaggerate Bella’s klutziness - it’s almost like she’s disabled.

I'm not too surprised he imprinted and I'm glad about it! I'm just confused why he didn't start imprinting until the day in Port Angeles. why not the day he helped her with the rock? or assuming New Moon canon events apply here, when she slapped him? or any other time they have seen each other? I am intrigued by the fact the imprint got stopped also though! I'm excited to see where things go from here!

i was just waiting to see how you would pop the imprint on us. that was just great! well done. totally! love how you built up Paul there. he was perfect. superb.

I loved this story so much.

Loved this story so much. So glad that they saw through Rachel before he actually did anything with her, I'm fairly certain it would have despite Jake and Embry's reassurances. Jasper ending Alice was poetic justice, especially working with Paul to take out Edward. Great story! Thanks for writing.

Well thank GOD! I was gonna have to kill an imaginary person!

If he cheats on her with Rachel I am done with this story. Just saying.

HOLY HELL! Did that rat bastard vampire steal their baby!? If that's the case, I think Carlisle was in on it! I hope the pack kills them...ALL OF THEM!