WHY DID YOU KILL HER?!

It's sweet and romantic... but you shouldn't have killed her. I cried so so much

We need a payback! U made us cry with this fic now male us happy with another fanfic and update The R.H. Case

Omg i am not crying you are! Fr u made ur viewers cry so hard. If someone told me this fic was from a professional writer i would have believed it without any doubts

Oh god you made me cry u r such a great author jui keep making masterpiece like this. U seriously have some skills. Keep going

I really love your stories . I am seriously crying after reading this. So sweet, sad and romantic. Fantastic fanfiction. ()()

U DIDNT TURN OUT HOW I THOUGHT,I NEVER EVER CRID FOR A ATORY BUT...THIS IS ONE OF MY FIRST

AND ITS SO SWEET HE NAMED HIS CHILD MISAKI

BUT F I WROTE THISI WOULDNT BE A ONE-SHOT it would be a story and in it,misaki isn’t rlly dead and they meet again an he divorces he wife cause she was abusive towards his daughter and then his ex-wife dies and he Mary’s Miami and he changes his child’s name to hikari
and they live. A happy life

ohh jui,,,, my tears huweeeeee :'(
awesome fic as ever..

ohmigosh... my binge-reading journey O: okaiz okaiz first of all, you seemed so nervous and so formal naww cute ;3 and so many "..." xD ahah I found that adorable for your first fic ;P speaking of the fic, it was so sad ;-; rip Misaki and poor Usui still love it tho~

OMG u r amazing
I am emotionless and this story made cry so much

A heart-breaking idea and story. It's good, but you need to check your stories to make sure the sentence makes sense, okay? I'm a year late, so you would had improved tremendously now. Good Job!

I liked the plot, and I understand that English isn't your first language. You could get someone to Beta this for you, because there are a lot of grammatical errors.
Just some constructive criticism, which I hope you don't mind.

I read this story once and i am still fascinated by this story ! This story is so sad but yet so touching 3 At first I was a little bit confused about a little girl whose name is Misaki but then I understand and mio dio (omg in italian :D)
Your stories are always so good poignant !
Winnie 3~

oh!i hate for one thing that you made me cry after reading this !why you did that ,you should have given the story a happy remember never ever make their story !Do not made the reders cry again.

This was beautiful. It legitimatelyrics made my cry, I know you said it was a one-shot but more would be wonderful, thanks for this experience.
~~Till next story~~

soo sad