| Reviews for Mistakes and Mochi |
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Guest chapter 9 . 2/23 Thank you... |
temarichanx chapter 9 . 5/31/2018 Beautifiul:D |
Lau chapter 9 . 4/30/2017 Omg I absolutely love this story! I read all chapters in less than half a day. Thank you much for posting and sharing it with us. I'm looking forward to the new update. |
bartlettpear chapter 3 . 1/17/2017 D'aww, I really like the last line, Sasuke's reason for offering to make them dinner. I really like the little snippets of Hinata we see, the fact that she was kind and loved Naruto and her son gets props from me. Sasuke hiding behind the chips made me laugh, I'm glad he did reveal himself because I got secondhand embarrassment watching that lol |
Guest chapter 9 . 10/29/2016 I was supposed to study for an exam ...but this is just so good I couldnt stop reading! Normally Naruhina is not really my thing in sasunaru stories because usually it leads to Sasuke being a complete asshole in reaction to Narutos relationship with Hinata, but the way you wrote it it just clicks. Especially the whole dynamic of Naruto and Sasuke is just captured in such an honest way. The Neji thing was quite unexpected but really sweet. And I really want to eat mochi now. :) I hope you will continue this story you really are talented. |
SS chapter 9 . 7/30/2016 I stumbled upon this and just finished reading it and wow! I usually am turned off by such a strong NaruHina presence in stories but I sense where you're going which is what made this story even better. It makes me happy to see Sasuke working for Naruto's affection cause I feel like most times Naruto's always running after Sasuke (sounds like canon to me). The last you updated was a while ago and my heart shattered because whyyyyyyyy, I wanna see how it all works out! Anyways, thank you for the black eye bags im going to have tomorrow! |
2x2justfau chapter 9 . 6/1/2016 Love it |
kiki2222 chapter 9 . 4/27/2016 I can't wait for more! |
Guest chapter 9 . 4/22/2016 Yessss! An update! I'd almost given up hope. I'm really glad I didn't tho. I really like the idea of Naruto making Ushiogakure, and finding a place to belong with Sasuke and Nori. The moment between S & N in front of the orphanage was too sweet. |
Valm chapter 9 . 4/6/2016 I just want to say that I love your story. |
Meehalla chapter 9 . 3/14/2016 Oh my gosh! I don't knownwhy this story don't have more review because, hell this story deserve it! Maybe because of a NaruHina child. Even me, who is hard to please I fell in love with Nori. I still wish Hina wouldn't take so much place, but I guess its still hasn't been long since her death. Anyway, this story is gold and people needs to acknowledge that. I need more soon! |
Jakoparena chapter 9 . 3/12/2016 ...I almost jumped when I got the notification of an update! I already gave up on this even tho I treasure it so much and believe me u are totally no able to tell how much I love your style and the characters and just everything ...everything about it... I also love how you handled the Uzushiogakure matter, I just couldn't stop grinning it was so unexpected how it was neither of them but Naruto Oh and did I mention how real the characters feel here? Like... especially Naruto and Sasuke are so so real omg I love it! You totally get them So what else can I say but thank you and that I look foward to more ... a lot Ah thanks that you're back! |
shia naru chapter 9 . 3/12/2016 finally update! I almost give up to wait for new chapter () oh, so the rival with neji end in this chapter? hmm... I'm curious what will be on Sasuke's way to have Naruto next? another rival maybe? or it will memories about Hinata? I really hope next chapter will update soon |
Karelia Jones chapter 9 . 3/11/2016 This chapter was so good! I can't even express to you how happy it made me to see an update and that the chapter was so spectacular. More please! |
Guest chapter 9 . 3/11/2016 I wonder if neji could still have someone in the end.. .maybe gaara. I really like this story. |