WOOO UN UNIVERSO DISTINTO DE LOS QUE HE LEIDO DONDE HARRY SGUE SIENDO NIÑO Y AL FIN RECIBE AYUDA DE LOS ADULTOS.

It’s great to see a new chapter added to the story. Sophie is a nice addition to Hogwarts, and I liked the way you wrote her sessions with Ginny and Harry. She took her cues from them, and it will be interesting the see the impact she’ll have on them. Perhaps Harry will able to stay at Neville’s for a bit in the summer and learn more about his family obligations. Although I’m holding out hope that Sirius’ story is revealed during the summer break (or before seeing Peter alive on the map), and gains custody of Harry. Looking forward to seeing where you decide to take the story. cheers!

great chapters
I really like the friendship between Harry and Ginny

So excited to see an update! Hope Sirius gets his name cleared soon! Can’t Wait for the next chapter!

Just an observation: If you combined all your notes you'd probably have enough words published to make another chapter. My observation thus far is that the notes add nothing to the story itself.

This is excellent work. The two of them are making progress and really finding their voices, and that's amazing to watch

It was great to see a new update to your story today! I'm glad to see Harry and Ginny getting some help with the trauma from the Chamber of Secrets. That was something that was really glossed over in the books. I can understand why JKR did so, but I think its an interesting thing to explore.

Had to read from the start again, but that was not really a problem. Great update all told. Unless you have a background in Phsychology it can be hard to write so no issues with what you have for the sessions, don't think you need to go into much more detail there.
Looking forward to the developing relationship with Ginny and response to query re Sirius.
Keep up the good work.

While i like your idea for the story, the thing you have let harry say about how ambitious, funning and sly is a mark for evil is just wrong. For example most people are ambitious. Like if you want a certain jon position you have to be ambitious. Those things arenothing bad. But you make it out to be even going as farassaying percy could yo dark because he is ambitious. but iant because he is a gryffindor thatssorry bs

Thank you for updating! I loved this chapter and am looking forward to the new one.

Ein guter Anfang-Ich schreibe nicht oft Reviews, aber werde deine Story in meine Favoritenliste aufnehmen.

Ich verstehe wirklich nicht, wieso du diese FF nicht beendest. Schließlich hat deine Geschichte sehr viel Potential und du könntest Großes daraus machen.

I simply love it. I also have started writing fan fictions recently and know how it is. I love this story and your friendship between Harry and Ginny. I really wish you would show intentional Ron, Hermione, Dumbledore and Molly bashing, but I'll read it anyways. Please update soon!

Is there a chance you will come back to this story sometime? I would like to see where it goes from here. Hopefully your muse cooperates with you.

I'm not sure if I found this story before... But I have to say I'm really enjoying this so far and hope some time in the not to distant future... That you will continue it.

I want to see more interhouse unity occurring... And the friendship between this group. At this point in time I do not see Harry staying close friends with either of the other two and making strides with this new group.

I also like the maturity you have brought to Harry and Ginny due to there experiences throughout this year of school (and Harry's first year)... It goes a long way from the original story and I like it. I always throught of Harry as more mature than he came across and little jaded from his relatives... But it's not explored in the books.

The same with Wizarding culture. The understanding of the family history and how the culture differs to mainstream England (non-mag). As it seems they do take a lot of influence from the non-mag but don't acknowledge it.

Explaining Snapes practices with his own house was well throughout and probably something could've occurred in the universe its self. After all there were times where Snape would pull one of his house students off to the side to talk... Not farfatched. I would to see the idea the 'study group' came up with bear fruit. It something I don't think the students would of thought of because they were so divided... In this case, if it does work... Later on they could easily get rid of the pink toad. Ahahahahahaha... She will not know what is coming.

I'm glad you allowed the part showing where Poppy actually noticed the abuse and tried to help Harry... It makes you wonder if she is trying to do anything behind the scenes.

Teachers having to help pay... I think that's some even non-mag schools do in this century so... Yeah that makes sense. If they're worried about the food issue so much... They could work out something else. For example, parents sending students food more often... Or asking the older students to get some sort of food outside of the school during Hogsmede trips... Or something... Anything. Or the school produced more of the food they need, like fruit and vegetables in a greenhouse and students can learn how to grow it too. I know they had roosters... So hens is not that far off. They could ask the people in Hogsmede to start farming there... Ect.

Just some thoughts... I'm going to stop this review as it's late where I am. Please pick up this story again. Night, night.

not sure, but McG's letter seems a bit too 'plot points' in nature. As if you are using it to give an excuse of certain things to become fact in this story. her having suspicions about things might be plausible, but 'guessing' about peter's form and then extrapolating that he maimed himself and caused the explotion to cover his escape, is a bit much.