Haha this was funny and I really liked it!
Leave it to Sirius to blurt it all out really loudly! Lol and that wink James gave that tipped them off! XD

loved it! great. gave me a good laugh

This was surprisingly good, considering it's your first fanfiction, how young you are and the fact that English is probably not your first language (I stalked your profile). You really managed to keep everyone in character, while telling a very entertaining story.

I'd love to read more from you soon.

Very good a little short but keep it up :)

That was amazing. You should have had Sirius catch up with them, though.