Awww this was an interesting fanfic! Love it!

I enjoyed seeing your take on their relationship and the give and take between them. Good job!

I loved this! You did a really good job on writing how Leo's emotions were towards the rain, and I love how you wrote his P.O.V.

Lol perfect way to end this story :D

Nicely done on this. I really liked the writing style and descriptions here, and you captured the characters really well. Great work!

That was awesome! Really enjoyed this story.

Ahh I loved this concept of all Leo wanted to do was sit down and read a book but things get piling up. I loved the brotherly fluff and bet if raph hadn't been stabbed his answer to Leo would have been even deeper and sincere. I bet he was thinking of Leo crashing through the window like he had earlier... Anyway great brilliant job on this can't wait to see more of you
Keep writing