| Reviews for Void Berserker Series Book 1: The Red Legion |
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Guest chapter 26 . 8/28 Por favor actualiza me encanta necesito más de esto . Me encanta como escribes . |
Pimity chapter 4 . 3/4 fucking dogshit, you really think that trash like louise can bend a chaos marine to her will? fucking kill yourself and never write again, you are a filthy disgrace |
FriggleBerry chapter 2 . 10/25/2019 Fuck this I hate fics where people are forced to do shit especially when people are already strong and have to do shit for weak ass people. Louise is the epitome of weak until she gets that book from the headmaster so this is hella weird and she would be quaking in her boots if every single other fic I’ve read has anything to say about it this is just too much for me I’m sure it’s good but not for me |
RandoFox chapter 6 . 10/5/2019 How did 51 cavalry win against 900 elves? Im pretty sure thats impossible. |
RandoFox chapter 2 . 10/5/2019 BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD, CONQUER THIS WORLD IN HIS NAME |
Cowmangler9000 chapter 12 . 9/27/2019 GONNA BE A GOOD STOMPIN |
SomeGuyOverHere chapter 25 . 8/16/2019 Really good chapter! A lot got explained in this one. I always wondered why Khorne of all the Chaos Gods would be the one taking an interest in this world, but after reading all of it, I think it makes sense. Suck it Tzeentch! That being said, I would love to see the other Chaos gods get thrown into the mix in the future! It would be awesome if like Tzeentch were to contact one of Louise's classmates and use them as their own avatar against Khorne. Speaking of Louise, I'm glad to see that her character is progressing towards embracing Chaos. Slowly but surely, she shall understand the pleasure of killing! FOR KHORNE! Keep writing my friend! |
SomeGuyOverHere chapter 24 . 8/15/2019 Another great chapter! Starting to miss the Khornates though. |
SomeGuyOverHere chapter 23 . 8/15/2019 A good fight between two armies. I'd say that your writing prose has really improved since you first started this story. |
SomeGuyOverHere chapter 19 . 8/14/2019 Oh shit! The prophecy is coming true! |
SomeGuyOverHere chapter 18 . 8/14/2019 That was messed up...I love it! |
SomeGuyOverHere chapter 17 . 8/14/2019 Can't have a chaos cult without some good old fashion pillaging |
SomeGuyOverHere chapter 16 . 8/14/2019 Good chapter! I especially liked the part at the end. I don't know why but I always enjoy a bit of political intrigue and scheming. I'm sure Ghathrax will be all too happy to take his horde and go off on a rampage in Albion. |
SomeGuyOverHere chapter 15 . 8/14/2019 Awesome battle! |
SomeGuyOverHere chapter 13 . 8/14/2019 Khorne will be very pleased! Can't wait for Ghathrax to join the battle. I'm also glad the that so far things aren't too one sided. I enjoy reading a curb-stomp battle, but it's also good to see that the enemy is competent. |