I can't even remember the last time I read this story, but thank god I forgot most of it, I read the story once I think when it first go online then forgot then name. Then I trid to look for it, somehow I remember something with vertigo. Because it was the effect of the jutsu not the jutsu name.

But am I glad to found it again. This is my 3rd or 4th time read this, and I still love it like the first time I read this.

Thank you very much for this story and the spin off

would this be the end of this series? if not waiting for more updates. If so then it was a nice read anyways.

Why don't you do a sequel where temari comes for her training with kushina that she wanted in this story. And have her and shikamaru slowly fall in love

Would love a chapter of how kakashi read letters from mom and sister he never had. What was in them and how did he react to it?

xD *cackles* Gawd that's priceless teenage drama right there. thank you for the option of which rating to read. I got rec'd the ffn version so read through that. plus the ffn app means faster review than on ao3.

this was both adorable and hilarious because yes, ninjas. and gossip. the amount of bribery needed to keep a secret like that has got to be crazy. good planning on her part though.

xD xD xD holy Frick. oh gosh. I'm *wheezing* this was krarking amazing. oh gosh. xD xD xD
Jiraiya writing everything in freaking caps. going back and forth with Sakumo and then Minato and Natsumi herself going back and forth? kriffing hilarious. poor Imochi. Tsunade's comments are freaking priceless. oh gosh xD xD xD amazing.

yeah whole chunks of records get blacked out. was curious why you out the physical description so low rather than near the top as even with the medical stuff following, but I guess since the medical notes often listed scars that add to physical description that works.

awwww 3 that's adorable.

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daaaaang. well this was brilliant. love the introspection. kick ass, it really isn't every day you get to use a jutsu.

gawd this was kriffing AMAZING. holy JOK was this incredible. I gave myself a stitch laughing so hard at the first half and absolutely love how the rest played out. poor TenTen doesn't know what hit her.

also, want to make that family tree even more twisted? have Temari and TenTen hook up. xD they can bond over fuinjutsu at the chunnin exams. gawd this chapter was brilliant.

gaaaaaawwwwwwww that was so bloody adorable! my heart! I love Minato being the one to solve it for him, as it really does add that full circle feeling with him being Natsumi's brother (in a way different from Kakashi).

oof that ending though. accurate. painful, but accurate. fantastic job touching on all the sore points and maintaining the reflective pace

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aaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh this was bloody amazing! Temari! yay! also yay that their mom lives to stop their dad from being an idiot! so glad Natsumi was able to remind him to keep the humanity at the focus. and the hinting at Sasori being the Kazekage was brilliant.

awwwwwwwwwww T_T poor Hiashi. glad he was able to come to terms with it and I love that he used it as a bed time story.

xD XD XD oh gosh that was freaking hilarious. thank you for giving us this moment!