Haha love it

OMG! I am trying to calm down! That was awesome! I knew Pai was a pervert!

hahahahaha so funny!

OMFG! I hate Ryou in thoes story! Or Pai. Pai is looking at the PORN and Ryou treats Ichigo like a CRAP. This is...FUCKING UNEXPECTEPAL!

continua

Ok wow I loved this! Btw everyone knows ryous a perv

This story was really funny especially that opening sentence, "Kisshu was daydreaming about Ichigo in his room when..."
I can totally imagine that happening XD
I think you should work on your characters staying in-character. And stop hating on Ryou all the time, jeez, why do you hate him so much?

Hope you don't delete this comment because I don't see this as flaming. I see this as constructive criticism. Apologies if you take any offence.

Both Pai and Ryou are now perverts...
ok then... XD

After Ichigo's long speech about all of the horrible things Ryou does to her... "I think thats about it."
You're done already? (lol)

Then Kisshu... chopped up Ryou into little pieces... with... TARUTO WATCHING?! (XD)
once again with the somewhat dark humor... XD

pie likes porn...? whoa...and haha...Ichigo's list of 'why Ryou is evil' was hilarious, great story by the way!

I feel disturbed now
xD Good story tho

It vas fun, and Ichigos explanaton was long, no doubt Ryou's evil :D

Oh wow, you'd think Ryou would know better than to do all that to Ichigo. But I guess some people just never learn, do they? And Pai needs to stop with the porn. That was funny though when Lettuce fainted after Ichigo told her.
Ichigo: "I think she fainted."
Taruto: "Pai's gonna kill us."
Kisshu: "And then dig us up, revive us, and kill us again."
I nearly fell over laughing at that part. And Kisshu stealing money from Ryou was pretty funny too (seriously, who needs all that money? unless you were Ryou of course). Anyway, yeah, this was really funny. :D

Great story.

this was a little strange, but I was watching porno pai taste or were those Greek statues or whatever you call