I look forward to reading the rest of the fic

this story is way to contradicting ...I like that ur Naruto sticks to one personality nd not like other authors who always change him according to certain situations but at the end of the day 20 chapters later nd nothing drastic has really happened... the 3rd changing his behavior so suddenly after he let things get so fucked just means he could have always done something abt narutos condition but never tried hard enough... u have a smart and manipulative Naruto yet he has yet to really manipulate anyone in the leaf to actually hurt the village or something it's just been this is happening and that is happening but everything is still as it was the leaf still stands,Danzo still stands ,orochimaru still stands u made akatski do his bidding ,Obito is dead Madara is dead Sasuke never goes to orochimaru so he never kills him so Kabuto never gets the opportunity to fuse himself with orochimaru's DNA that is a lot of villians eliminated .

the story is still slow with way to many filler chapters always adding more problems instead of solving them...Naruto says he does not hate the 3rd but really the third should have been the one to hurt him the most becoz he watched him suffer while acting like a loving Grandpa... he hid the identity of his parents knowing it would mean alot to him to have such info... sending ppl to spy on him nd low key trying to emotionally manipulate him into serving konoha by telling him all those sappy things abt his parents I don't know what u have planned or how u wrote somethings the way u do but I get my own understanding of this story nd I won't lie this story is probably abandoned coz u lost track of exactly what you wanted nd got bored of writing these fillers

this story is way to contradicting ...I like that ur Naruto sticks to one personality nd not like other authors who always change him according to certain situations but at the end of the day 20 chapters later nd nothing drastic has really happened... the 3rd changing his behavior so suddenly after he let things get so fucked just means he could have always done something abt narutos condition but never tried hard enough... u have a smart and manipulative Naruto yet he has yet to really manipulate anyone in the leaf to actually hurt the village or something it's just been this is happening and that is happening but everything is still as it was the leaf still stands,Danzo still stands ,orochimaru still stands u made akatski do his bidding ,Obito is dead Madara is dead Sasuke never goes to orochimaru so he never kills him so Kabuto never gets the opportunity to fuse himself with orochimaru's DNA that is a lot of villians eliminated .

the story is still slow with way to many filler chapters always adding more problems instead of solving them...Naruto says he does not hate the 3rd but really the third should have been the one to hurt him the most becoz he watched him suffer while acting like a loving Grandpa... he hid the identity of his parents knowing it would mean alot to him to have such info... sending ppl to spy on him nd low key trying to emotionally manipulate him into serving konoha by telling him all those sappy things abt his parents I don't know what u have planned or how u wrote somethings the way u do but I get my own understanding of this story nd I won't lie this story is probably abandoned coz u lost track of exactly what you wanted nd got bored of writing these fillers

Amazing story! Hope you continue it!

This is really good, hope you finish it; anyone who calls it bad or disgusting are retarded

This is a disgusting story. I have never read something worse than this. Whoever you are, please kill yourself. You do not deserve to live after making these shitty abominations you call “stories”.

Naruto is too nice. Your depiction of him is absurd and honestly disgusting. Fix the repetitive grammar errors.

lemon?

Is Naruto a sensor, or does he just have good senses?

this naruto is pathetic

I really liked this fic at first but it looks like even you dont undersrand your own plot. You have too many nodes in your story that make no sense

It really looks like a great fic but Id rather have no pairing than read a strange pairing like Naruto Samui. I mean really? Wtf...

Great job please continue

This shit hurts to read, you can almost physically feel the attempt to sound more intelligent just by looking at the first chapter. I only got half way into the first chapter and had to quit reading it, the idea is great the execution on the other hand is fucking atrocious. This is very obviously a 11 year old trying to ramp up their vocabulary to sound smarter to pitch their fic. Unfortunate because clan fics are almost non-existant on this website and the ones you do find are shitty.

Wtf