This is a really hard story to follow. You need spacing between your paragraphs to make it easier to understand

Can Jane be packing her gun at the charity even and shoot Mr Fucker in the balls. Please, Please, Please :)

Daddy to the rescue. Hope Richard hurts him a lot.

I'm warming to Maura's father more and more. At least he has that English twit Ian figured out. I've a horrible feeling he's doing the dirty on poor Maura.

Ridiculously good...

I've had so much fun reading this story again after many years. I had forgotten about the crossover with having Bette and Tina in the story. What a brilliant combination! Wouldn't it have been fun to be able to see this whole scene played out on the television. Really smart writing the way you blended their histories and their time together.

Fantastic AU! I loved the story! I am soooo happy there was no infidelity, even though they had feelings for each other in the early part of the tale. I am sooooo happy that the Isles were kind and loving, too! This was a lovely read. Thank you!

Well, that was a great, beautiful, sweet, loving story. And now I'm sad cause it's over! Thank you for sharing.

Beautiful!

I can't wait to see what Jane does! So glad I'm reading this wonderful story.

Beautiful. And FINALLY, someone realizes you can breath through your nose while kissing, and don't have to stop for air.

Perfect. So glad I'm reading this and you didn't listen to the morons complaining. I laughed so hard at Janes announcement. Great job.

Was even better the second time around.
Thank you.

I have to say for a first story this was exceptionally good. Very, Very well done. I look forward to reading more of you're stories.

I love how you've created Maura's father in this story. He's wonderful and I cant help imagining the late David Ogden Steirs who played Maura's father in one episode of the show as Richard.