Reviews for The Beast of Alaya
Venikas chapter 3 . 5/14
Interesting execution.
SuperFireman151 chapter 3 . 4/29
gods damnit. why do good and interesting stories die.
void242 chapter 3 . 11/17/2019
So.. uhh, got any update?
PasiveNox chapter 1 . 10/11/2019
Great
PasiveNox chapter 2 . 10/11/2019
Noce
WeirdGuyOne chapter 1 . 9/4/2019
The Counter Guardians being destroyed by Grimm?

That's impossible. Alaya empowers them with more power than their opponent.

And Grimm, even the Leviathan & Kevin, are fuckin weaksauce to Servants.
That's not even talking about CGs & Heroic Spirits.

I mean, I can understand Archer EMIYA being the CG who survives the longest out of all other CGs, he's got the experience & skills as well as wit, but even still, Salem herself couldn't beat a CG.

It's not that it'd be difficult, it's just that she has no chance whatsoever in a fight.

She'd be ground to paste in less than seconds, even with her immortality. That immortality wouldn't amount to much, either. EMIYA could one shot Salem with UBW.

Most CGs are fighting entities that completely outclass Salem & Ozpin combined, so it's quite odd that the Grimm beat a CG.

Oh well, old story.
adammflatt chapter 1 . 8/29/2019
Definitely an interesting start would love to see more
NomadicNine chapter 1 . 6/24/2018
We need more of this.
Ender the multiverse Detective chapter 3 . 3/27/2018
Very good
Guest chapter 3 . 3/21/2018
MOOOOOAAAARRR I WANT MOOOORRREEE
shadow chapter 3 . 9/30/2017
I liked the chapter!
BraveWolf13 chapter 3 . 7/8/2017
Pls continue
Ryoji Mochizuki chapter 3 . 3/31/2017
this is an amazing story, one of the best I've read, please update soon and keep up the good work
theflyingtankered chapter 3 . 1/19/2017
pretty fascinating in scope
olivia.rodriguez.927 chapter 1 . 12/28/2016
I love this please update !~
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