She says she moved past it a long time ago but has she really? I mean if she can't even talk about it that is a clear sign she hasn't moved past it. She is straight up deluded.

Gotta be honest but i don't really think Ruby and Weiss's relationship is very healthy. They have been dating for over a year and living together for about half that, they are both over 21 and yet still haven't slept together from what i gather, Weiss can't even share things that bother her and it seems even recoils from physical affection at times.

wow, that feels like a pretty accurate older Yang and Pyrrha. Yang tamed a lot with age and Pyrrha still overthinking, probably worse than her teenage years xDD I would like to see your take on their relationship going forward, since Pyrrha didn't to go forward with her romance feelings in the show...*sadface*

I had a lot of fun reading the white-rose fluff, it's not over the top, feels just right to me! Perfect after a long day :)

a minor inconsistency that stood out was in the chapter when Weiss asked Ruby to move in together, you mentioned Yang going to school on the other side of country (so I was pinning Yang to be Weiss' age), then turns out Yang is 28 and owns a bar. Does distract from the story, I guess maybe you changed it to better accommodate the Greek sun? Just something I noticed. Otherwise a fun read!

This is one of my favorites of yours and I can't wait until you update this one!

Please excuse the previous review, I commented on the wrong story.
I've enjoyed this fic, and learning about the little bits and pieces of fencing intertwined. The parts with Wiess and Winter are well done with the problems of family and how their parents would react. Thank you for writing this piece, I hope to see it continued.

Very fluffy, I have been enjoying reading. There hasn't been too much greekfire fics that I've noticed. Thank you for writing )

a raven-winged paladin with his head resting on the shoulder of an antlered druid.

I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE, YOU CANT HIDE THE CRITS FROM ME!

This was great. Loved it.

So glad you're writing this story again! Hope it continues. Also, I see that Vaxleth. Nice.

I liked the last chapter, pretty much entirely skipped this one when I saw only Yang and Pyrrha stuff. I probably said this before to some degree, but I followed for whiterose, didn't care for the pair tagged on as you went, and definitely don't care for them taking more and more time away from the main pair. I won't judge you for the ships, but if Greekfire is gonna be taking over the story, I'd prefer you say it plainly in an AN or something. I know it might be rude, but I don't want to sift through Yang and Pyrrha stuff just to find tidbits of whiterose. I'd prefer whiterose focus, even if there are tidbits of others thrown in. It feels like a second story developed alongside and then took over at this point.

Bold Pyrrha is nice.

Very adorable. Very short, but very cute. Nice update :D. Love love the shy/insecure side of Pyrrha, just makes me want to coo and make 'awwww' noises at her. Thanks for writing :)

That was great.
The costume choices were fantastic.
Short and sweet, leaving plenty of room to explore the night over a couple of more chapters if you wanted.
See you next chapter.

awesome chapter! cant wait for the 5 to 10 chapters that come before this one

An interesting bit of fluff, I like how you changed up the ages somewhat adds a little variety