Reviews for Breakaway
Shadowstorm11 chapter 7 . 7/2/2017
...this is the end? It's not a very good one
WolfyWolfWolf chapter 7 . 1/3/2016
Great story, although I think you should continue it.
MusicalShards chapter 7 . 3/13/2015
Aww, the end? This could easily be another SkyClan; I want to see what happens next!
whitewind04578 chapter 7 . 2/18/2015
Yay! Do more!
Also, could I have a rogue join FireClan?
Her name is Solace, she is black, with glowing green eyes and one white paw. Has one kit with her. I would like Solace's warrior name to be Rainheart. She is feisty, will fight to the death for her family and friends and has a good amount of pride. The kit's name is Runner, she is a dapple brown tabby with Solace's green eyes. She is quiet, shy and loves to heal. I'd like her to be named Leafkit and then eventually Leafpath. Might I ask that she become Sunstreak's apprentice? If not, totally fine. )
Thanks!
Whitewind of between Forest and Moors
Silverwind of Forestclan chapter 7 . 12/22/2014
I love this idea, warriors breaking away for their beliefs, in some ways the warrior code is stupid. I'm just glad that some one wrote a fanfic reminding people that the warrior code has its flaws.
Buffintruder chapter 7 . 12/21/2014
That was a good ending. I want to see what happens in the future conflicts between FireClan and the other four.
Bravelove chapter 7 . 12/19/2014
alert list please
Jojo of Faraway chapter 6 . 12/10/2014
Cool new chapter, I like the name of the camp 'the keep' it's really cool, also I like the idea of two deputies, with two of them something like Tigerstar wanted to kill Bluestar couldn't happen. And of course EmberClan cool idea and I am exited about the new chapter but I think the Deputie Mentor rule should stay :3
Sorry for any mistakes
Minionloverfe
Gray of Wingclan chapter 6 . 12/9/2014
I have an idea for hollynoses kits names. You could name one softkit for a pale gray shecat with apple green eyes, shadekit for a dark gray tom with amber eyes, and if there are more, I can always help with their names
Buffintruder chapter 6 . 12/9/2014
I really like the concept of EmberClan and having two deputies.
a moon's shadow chapter 1 . 12/8/2014
I really liked one of the codes of becoming a med cat and you can have a mate. I always have thought of that I mean what wrong with having a mate when you are a med cat anyway?
a moon's shadow chapter 6 . 12/8/2014
Please please please peas,update this is so good I love it!
Pepperonian chapter 6 . 12/8/2014
Oh wow! I really love this Fanfic! The characters all seem to have such vibrant and real personalities and reasons for what they do. I will follow and Favourite this at once!
Zanethebeast chapter 5 . 12/8/2014
Good story.
Buffintruder chapter 5 . 12/2/2014
Yay! They finally found a place for their Clan! The WindClan confrontation scene was great.
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