My poor child someone give this kid a dream catcher or something so those nasty nightmares are gone.

More more moreover momomore mo m oo reee moreeee

I rlly hope you would finish this... Ya had me awake all night and it's around 2 am already.. I admire your fanfic. I know there r a lots of stories that gets all mushy and stuff and the fact that you put so much uhh.. Anger and horror and stuff just made everything better. It's just so natural and on point

... *Anger. Pure unfiltered anger.* Why the hell is this the last chapter. I NEED to know what happens next.
I. NEED. MORE!

This is really good, you should definitely continue this, if you can:)

Dudeee. I read this years ago, but I'm still waiting! I need more! Please? I know you're probably busy and stuff, but I would love an update :DD

Nice

Please finish this story! It is so good! I love it!

I know what your talking about. I have insomnia myself, and most nights I just stare at darkness and listen to my dog breathe till like three in the morning.

No, no, no, no and more no's you can't do this too us. Oh meh go, please don't. You must update, you have to. Pretty please. (Puppy dog eyes.)

ugh I'm so upset. around chapter 8 I had a feeling chapter 13 wasn't gonna be the last chapter of this story but I couldn't stop reading anyway. I usually dont read stories unless I know they're complete, simply to avoid the empty feeling I get. I don't often leave reviews signed in but even though it's been a few years since you updated I was hoping a few nice words might persuade you to give it another shot! or at least some type of quick conclusion, even if it's only a few paragraphs, I wouldn't doubt your genius mind would type the perfect conclusion. I've been reading a lot of turtle stories lately and this has by far been one of the most enjoyable. I often forget stories that I've read but I can assure you this is one I won't forget, and it wil literally be on my mind probably all week, especially because it's incomplete. I started reading this late last night and reached the last chapter this morning. I feel like your character personalities are spot on, it's something not a lot of people can do, including myself! also it's really nice to read a story that's grammatically correct, isnt choppy or too confusing, and stays on the same story line! while I impatiently wait, I will remain hopeful that you'll decide to post a conclusion! until then I'm going to stalk your page and look for more great stories.

Awesome story
Whens the next chapter

aw c'mon dude MAJOR CLIFF HANGER TO THE MAAAAAAX! THIS STORY IS REALLY GOOD PLEASE UP DATE SOONER! _ :3

dude..THIS IS AN AWESOME STORY!

Please don't abandon this story!