| Reviews for The Makings of a Modern World |
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annamw15 chapter 1 . 10/24/2016 Beautiful. |
mille libri chapter 1 . 12/16/2014 That was sweet and hot and lovely all at once. |
pussycatwithattitude chapter 1 . 9/22/2014 The title reminds me of one of my modules last year, ha. But I loved this story. Such a cute little one-shot about something that I do think Anna would consider. That is, at least until John can persuade her otherwise. Ever since that wedding night scene when he played with her hair, you just swoon at the thought. And even though Anna would rock a bob, I'm glad she kept it. Great story, definitely a new favourite! |
theglamourfades chapter 1 . 9/20/2014 Can I just say that I love the premise for this story? It's a little thing, but I think quite considerable (even if Mary might think it puts her on par with women's rights activists, lol). Anna is a modern thinking woman, we know that much, so it's something she might definitely consider. I love anything where we see them go about their routines in their own space, and this was just the right combination of sweet and suitably sexy. And of course we know John's obsession with Anna's hair, so he's not biased at all ;) I think the image of Anna's hair tickling John while they are intimate is one of my favourite ever. So very sexy. The Anna and Mary scene was a lovely little way to end, and Anna thinking those thoughts are just brilliant. More than one good reason to keep her hair that long length...! Fabulous piece, as ever! |
Kristen APA chapter 1 . 9/17/2014 Lovely one-shot and very spot on, I must say :) |
anna4bates chapter 1 . 9/17/2014 This is so adorbs i can't even deal. I can just hear their sensual tones and oh my life yes to the way he loves feeling the ends of her hair tickle him. Wow. Yeah she better not change her hair style. We all love it too much. Gorgeous blonde tresses. |
Megan chapter 1 . 9/17/2014 I've loved your writing ever since I stumbled on "The Shadow Proves the Sun." You do Anna and John Bates pitch perfect -I hope you don't stop writing those two characters! |
dreamer 3097 chapter 1 . 9/17/2014 A good one |
Awesomegreentie chapter 1 . 9/16/2014 This is definitely one I will read over and over again. |
terriejane chapter 1 . 9/16/2014 What a lovely story! And how persuasive is that John Bates? Nicely done. |
Eady of Old chapter 1 . 9/16/2014 Beautiful story. While the descriptions and the situation were extremely well done, I think the spot-on dialogue was my favorite part. A very sexy peek into their private cottage life. |
mr-and-mrs-bates chapter 1 . 9/16/2014 I love each and everyone of these new updates you've been bestowing upon us. Thank you so much :) |