The story was fine. Ash can be op nobody really cares, and I actually liked the relationship between him and Snivy. Granted I wasn’t sure if it was a pokeshipping story, which I wouldn’t have minded, but I digress- it was a good story you shouldn’t have let it go.

Yes

bruh that hilarious

That was an awesome chapter. A few questions, will Misty still get Togepi, will Ash catch a Machop? Will he not go to Johto next?

Now I'm no longer depressed.

NOW I'M SUICIDAL

that author's note, literally, almost killed me. I choked becaue I laughed too hard! loved the its raining cookies

sees the word "flame" does this author mean flame as in fire? *pauses...*
"SO LIGHT EM UP UP, LIGHT EM UP UP. I'M ON FIRE!" *dies due to setting house on fire with a flamethrower* lol great fanfic btw.

I loved the plot twists... Please continue the story... You are an amazing writer!

Your writing is so good!

Ahh thia was a great story

There’s no reason to discontinue this fanfic, though it may be a bit late to say this. Sometimes you have to make the characters a bit oc. It doesn’t make the fanfic bad. It just gives it a style of your own. The grammar wasn’t all that bad either and I’m considered a grammar natzi. I mean sure it could of been better but it’s not worth throwing away the fanfic. When you start a story at a younger age, your grammar isn’t going to be perfect. To be honest no ones grammar is perfect so you shouldn’t feel that because of your grammar it’s bad. That’s not true at all.

Don't worry, this is just practice and that's not a big deal. I hope I read this rewritten version of "Ash's Pokemon Journey" when the grammar is all fixed and ready for Fanfiction readers like me.

Scythers are native, scizors arent.

Manaphy Ditto Phione
Manaphy Manaphy Nothing
Manaphy Mew Manaphy
Manaphy Kyogre Lugia

Curse you. And tell zoroark have fun with his colorful 4 legged friends