I like that your lead female character is Native-American (Indigenous). The characters are always usually Caucasian, or African-American.

I know this is how most people (women) would act in this situation, but as a woman myself, I'm embarssed by her cowardnes.

Great story! Loved it and looking forward to the sequel!

Great story! Keep up the great work and update soon!

awesome story please update!

Love it. Please update soon

Really love this story
Best thing I’ve read till now
Keep up the good work and please do start a sequel
PLEASE..

The sequel PLEASE...

Awww I’m so happy with that beautiful ending! This was such a sweet story to read, well except the brutal killing parts and No’elia’s murderous fantasies. :P Lol. A nice plot twist too. Thank you for sharing, I so enjoyed it! 3 Now on to the sequel.

Ugh, her betrayal was unexpected but somehow not surprising. Poor No’elia. How many years will she have to wait before Dae’er even realizes she’s gone? I wonder how Earth is after all this time.

I knew it! I can’t wait for their pup. What an attentive and loving mate Dae’er is, I love how he’s obsessed with her. Even though he kidnapped her and was pretty selfish in the beginning, he’s developed a sacrificial attitude towards her. She’s the kind of woman who really deserves it too, recognizing and reciprocating it. Btw I forgot to say that the mention of Mr Myogi last chapter had me actually laughing out loud, soo funny. :D

Oooh I suspect he’s going to the infirmary to find a way to knock her up haha. It’s been on my mind since the beginning, I really hope it happens!

Wooah what a sexy scene. You know how to write a lemon, girl. So curious about the games... how will she do? ::bites nails::

Wow, I love where this is going, the little Cat speaking Yautja and hunting. You have some very cool ideas like with the flower. So curious about her future now.

Getting deep in this chapter, I like it. :) Erie is soft, yes, but she’s developing a spine. She’s still a young woman and pretty naive. I like how Dae’er is teaching her these hard lessons, that makes them bond even more.