Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Could you write the sequel of it. I'm curious about the development of their relationship and the child

Oh wow, this was so dark and enthralling. I'm not quite sure what I had expected, but this was creepy on one level and so very interesting on another level. Especially Dawn's father was so creepy, why would he do that to his daughter? So calculated and cold, and oh, poor Dawn, growing up like that. And her idea that all that she did, the Coordinating and the travelling and the friends and everything, that it was all for nothing since she was back at the beginning anyway. It seems that Dawn has landed in a somewhat similar situation as her mother, because Paul is almost as calculating as Dawn's father, only we see a more human side to him. It seems he's trying... Man, I wish we could see more of this, how Paul finally did manage to come closer. It does end up on a hopeful note for Paul, but Dawn still thinks he doesn't care...
Anyway, thank you very much for writing this, it was really cool (and creepy, but mostly cool) and keep writing! ! !

I never saw this type of fic in which a guy is backing up for 'that'

This wasn't really much of a lemon. I loved it and I think you should rate it as T since it has a mature, intimate scene but with no real details to it. I would love to see a follow-up one shot of this.
theasianwonder

Loved it! xD

GOOD