Simply amazing and adorable. I loved the medieval touch to it, like how Ruby and Yang were hunters living in a cottage, a really cool idea. And Weiss was an actual princess in this story, hahah, this time when Yang called her princess it wasn’t just puns..

And that pun at the end... good job.

Thank you for writing this story!

This whole thing was just a seven thousand word set up for that pun wasn't it? Admit it. I won't judge you.

Anyway, good ol White Rose complimented by some great writing. Good stuff right here.

Yang will always be Yang. Anyway, this story was completely awesome. I loved reading every bit of it.

Me likey.

I LOVED that joke at the end! It gave me a good laugh :D

Absolutely wonderful. Very well planed might I add

this was great! I enjoyed every single part of it

Okay, this is the first time I've read two stories from the same author so far, and I already have a couple more qued up to read, but I must say that I, personally, have an immense fascination with medieval fantasy and I would LOVE to see this continued to a decisive close. This ending felt like a giant cliffhanger to me and it wrong knowing that it may never be finished. (I know as the author you withhold the right to decide when one of your stories is finished, but I feel like this setting has far to much potential to let go to waste. Not to mention that Blake never even made an appearance...)

Okay now that that rant is over, great story, great setting, good descriptions, and great way of transitioning the characters and backstories Into the setting.

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
No matter how many fanfics I read, yang always delivers with the bad,but funny puns.

And this wonderful stuff isn't a series? Dang, that would've been so much fun to read. This one-shot was really good, man. I hope momoxtoshiro's impressed with your work, because I certainly am!

This was great, you don't usually see one-shots this long, but this was rather good and I'm hoping you do a continuation of some sort.

That pun was pure gold. This story has a lot of potential for development as well! Some mild critiscm here, the amount of character and world building feels odd for such a quick wrapping up of the story. I wouldn't say you should make a sequel or anything, but if you had made the story longer you could have transitioned slightly better from hints of romance to a make out session and a promise to return. But it's still great and better than I could have done.

You should continue this please. It is amazing and would be even more so if you continued it. BTW, loved that lesbian pun. Made me laugh soon hard.

I'm glad I finally sat down to read this, it was a great read. Obviously not right now because you have 4 other stories to focus on, but I'd love to see more of this story in the future. :)

This was a great story. I had a good laugh at the ending. Thanks for writing this. :)