I really enjoyed reading your story. Poor Sammy!

Edge of the seat, as always! I loved the twin twist! And pulling in Bobby was perfect! As I think I've said before, I really miss Bobby. I am so grateful that you include him so often. This was another in your very long line of excellent stories! Thank you and God bless you!

I love the contrast between humor and seriousness. One minute there is lots of pain, the next minute there is lots of funny nonsense coming from drugged up sam, and I love it. This was a great story to read.

I have been such a terrible reviewer! I'm so sorry. I have shamelessly read every story you have posted recently, but I haven't reviewed. I kept wanting to take the time to write a review worthy of the effort and creativity you put into your stories. Clearly this isn't working for me. So, I just have to take the time I have to tell you that this was such a wonderful read! Five chapters long ... such a wonderful treat! I loved this story! And so nice to read it just before the start of Season 10 (woo hoo!). I always know that when I see you've posted a new story, I'm going to love it - and of I course I loved this one as well. I loved the way you described the location, environment, situation, and really brought the story and their emotions to life. Thank you so much for posting!

Hi Karen! Awww...this was an awesome story. I have to tell you that I was just laughing away at Dean when the cat was winding around his legs in the 1st chapter. Can you just imagine that on the show? We've never seen him around any cats, right? Hee hee. Poor Sam, always getting in trouble and not just a little trouble either. But I did cheer very loudly when they tagged teamed those slimy yucky things! Woo hoo teamwork all the way, baby! Thanks for sharing! : )

Oh Karen, you magnificent girl! I am amazed time and time again of your ability to write awesome MOTW stories with exciting creatures and graphic, mysterious settings. This was definitely another one of those! And hurt!Sam protective!Dean rain pure epicness! A
Keep up the great work! You rock, my friend!

Elisa.

Ha...awwww! Just got around to reading this and wow I love the brother feels and Dean's rough exterior and softy insides and Sam was just a puppy dog throughout this entire story and you can't tell me otherwise! The case was entertaining...reminded me of a crossover with Pirates of the Caribbean! Of course the moments between and the signature banter like only you can provide were what made the story for me! *Applauds* And ending with Sammy all drugged to the gills and Dean acting annoyed but relieved was a sweet treat so thank you for that :) Always excited to see a new story or chapter from you! Thanks for writing, darling! Cheers!

Hey! Love the conclusion, hon. Wish I could say more, but I'm not feeling too well tonight.

Just know that I love ya, eh?

Kind regards,
ST xxx

Love this story so much!
The detail is so amazing and the brotherly love feeds my soul.
Well done - you rock!

"You in pain?" "A nine." Crap he didn't want to say that. "But... um... no... I'm fine." Haha, loved that! :)
Happy to see Bobby being there for his boys again. And Sammy all doped up is so adorable - "Vroom-vroom to Bobby's"! Aaawhh! Wanna cuddle him! :D Great end to another great story! Thanks so much, really enjoyed that. You're the best!
Take care!

Great end to this story with drugged up Sam and limping Dean off to Bobby's to recuperate! Think they may try his patience though, but the old hunter wouldn't have it any other way.
Great read, loved it :)

Very sweet: Dean reassuring Sam, Bobby turning up to banter with them and cute, silly Sam-on-drugs: what else could you possibly want? ;)

Brilliant plot: so good I didn't review the last chapter because before I knew it I was on to Chapter 4!
A couple more mistakes:
- "done and doner" (of course it doesn't exist, but I think one "n" would respect the verb's spelling better)
- "They're both toast" (their being the possessive adjective: their car.)

Apart from that, the brotherly banter is funny and in this case ridiculously endearing! And Dean's "monster of an ass" was hilarious! ;)

Another good chapter, with some lovely brotherliness! Always welcome. :)

An excellent, very interesting opening chapter! Lots of suspense to end it off too! ;) The characterisation is very good, and it's well written, though I spotted a couple of mistakes:
- * "too busy" (if it's in the sense of too much of something, always two "o"s)
-* stealthily (stealth is a noun, and can't be used in a list with other adverbs).

I'm just pointing that out because you're a brilliant writer, and to help you reach perfection! ;) Can't wait to read the next chapter...