Reviews for Brothers Bael
Guest chapter 2 . 12/31/2016
Naruto X Seekvaira X Rossweisse
daniel 29 chapter 2 . 9/9/2016
wonder who you have in mind for naruto's girlfriend
Clay19 chapter 2 . 10/4/2015
you did the same as everybody else, when I thought this would be better!
genesicgaogaigarvsgodgundam chapter 1 . 9/13/2015
nice
AO Black chapter 2 . 8/24/2015
Are you gonna continue this ?
On Eno chapter 2 . 5/21/2015
For the Bishop, I only really think either a bloodline jutsu user would be useful for that, possibly Haku, for her Demonic Ice Mirrors. The rook worth two pieces? Rock Lee, no contest. He is shown to be the physically strongest ninja in his generation, all because of determination and hard work, tempered by a complete inability to use magic. The three pawns...Shikamaru would be good, as a strategist, Kankuro would be good for a mid-range fighter with his puppet jutsu, and maybe one of the Kendo club in DxD would be good if he goes to Kuoh Academy at one point.
As for the Romance, perhaps Koneko or Kuroka- Koneko, from helping her get closure from the 'Betrayal' of her older sister, and Kuroka, due to him somehow finding out what she did for her sister and vowing to help her clear her name. The romances could progress from there.
raveman2 chapter 2 . 5/18/2015
Yet another story that is fantastic, yet hasn't been updated in a while. There is so much potential in your work I do hope I get to see what happens next. Take care until then!
Yifto chapter 2 . 3/31/2015
Hirata should be used they have the same situation no? All being rejects of they're clan.
desdelor97 chapter 2 . 2/18/2015
This was a great keep up the great work.
Will chapter 2 . 1/13/2015
Huh so you cut right to the chase. Although it's nice that you skipped a large portion of the exposition that everybody knows will happen I still wanted to see more of their childhood : (. But oh well now that twins are going to the human world I look forward to see their interaction with Rias and her peerage especially Issei. Considering the fact that they're two male nobles I bet Issei thinks that they are trying to snatch Rias from him.

I hope that you update soon but until then ciao. ; )
megaslayer321a chapter 2 . 12/7/2014
interesting story i'm curious who is a part of naruto's peerage.
Guest chapter 2 . 11/19/2014
update please
KiraWani chapter 2 . 11/13/2014
I don't know if your still looking for peerage members but I would suggest Heracles. for the rook cause he has both super strength and a sacred gear or if you don't think he's strong enough for the three pawns. The main reason I want him though is cause his sacred gear reminds me of ZongHeng TianXia's soul gear from Feng Shen Ji.
Zero Star chapter 2 . 11/3/2014
Get pumped for the next!
SpeeDemon chapter 2 . 10/25/2014
Im more upset that you are adding other naruto characters in this.
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