A great story and a nicely done crossover. I enjoyed the reimagining of the Powerpuff Girl's origins and I liked how Dexter interacted with them. The pacing was good, the romance was done well, and the action scenes were well written.

Great job!

Aw, I'm reviewing pretty early, since it seems your done with the story.

Though i Do have point out some missed jokes i had hope you were going to reference.

Such as Dexter computer, celebrating its birthday with a cake; Portal reference i'd hope.

Dexter in Paris dream; Omelette au fromage; (Cheese) episode reference.

Will give my final review at last chapter. I have been enjoying your work so far, a little surprised at change of origins of powerpuff girls. Regardless, great detail you put into.

Another fine chapter. It seems the further I go in this story the less mistakes I see. Which is a good thing as it means you were steadily improving while writing this. You seemed to have stopped switching tense for the post part. Really at this point the only complaints I have are rather minor. You seem to use the phrase "says" a lot. Honestly I don't know for sure if thats a writer don't, but to me it's notcible. Maybe other ways to describe someone saying something would have been better, made it flow better. Speaks, answers, responds questions, tells. Just a few alternatives

And like I said before a few bits could have been rewritten to help flow better. But overall this is still pretty good

Still enjoying this. The rewrite of the PPGs origins is interesting and not half bad though with how it's presented it feels like a big info dump. I don't know may e it would have been better to have Blossom slowly tell him about it throughout the story. Either way its not bad, just probably could have been presented in a slightly better way. ..

I noticed there's still the case of misused or misspelled words. And the change of tense is still present. Other than that this still a relatively good narrative.

Okay a lot of good things. I like the pacing of this story, it feels as though the quality of writing jumped up a little between this chapter and the last. Obviously there are still a few points that could use a little refinement but I'm able to look past it and enjoy the story. The development between characters is very good, I actually like that Blossom and Dexter are slowly getting closer. And while I know that they are the main pairing and focus I also like the friendship he shares with Blossom's sisters. The Mandark think is definitely interesting and I'm curious to see how him teaming up with HIM will go. This is easily the best Dexter/Blossom story I've read so far. There was another I read that I kind of liked but the development between Blossom and Dexter was just too fast and not all that interesting. I like the slow build between these two, I feel that they have a good foundation. Good job.

Okay so far I like this. I like the pacing and natural flow of character building especially between Dexter and the girls. However there is one glaring problem with this story and it's the writing. While nowhere near horrible, I actually can try to look past it even if there are a few bits that kill the flow for me. You keep changing tense which is slightly jarring (don't feel too bad about this I used to do it all the time and even now I still slip up from time to time.) You've misspelled or missused a couple words here and there. And I feel that a number of paragraphs could have been rewritten to flow better.

Overall this is actually pretty good. The characters and plot is thus far interesting a d the writing isn't half bad. It just needs a little refinement. Sadly though I don't foresee this being updated since it has been a long while since this story was touched. Nevertheless I still interested d to keep reading.

This was a very briliant story.
I realy liked your all of your uniqe ideas :3

I really enjoyed this. Dexter and Blossom have very believable chemistry, and the story and action are also very good. I can say that this cemented my status as a DexBloss fan.

I must read more

I reply like wher it's going.

I love this story, I was scrolling down the list until I came across this particular story,I thought it was just going to be garbage but after reading the first chapter,I decided to read until the end. and it was beautiful all the way through,especially chapter 6. make more stories like this please

Nice story but you forgot that Dexter has blue eyes, not green eyes.

Wasn't it revealed by the creator of the show that Dextor in fact did give Monkey his powers and Monkey merely hid them from him?

I luv this storie great job

ooohhhhh snap I'm gonna review in later chapters i just had to say that