PrincessNellas we love please do your sequel at your own pace though.

I hope to still see your sequel!

If just a question mark shows up before I state my thoughts on the story, it said “pert three wen” in the style where there’s a space between each letter.

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Seriously though, this is a really good story and honestly, I don’t mind if the third part doesn’t come for a while.

There’s gonna be more at some point right?

Dear Princessnelas,

This story is one of the best Mario stories on this site. No doubt about it. As a Mario fan, I like to read well thought out plots and storylines, but when you go on the Mario page on and filter to complete stories with over 40k words, you get 199 stories. This is one of the best, if not the best Mario story on this site. (I recommend reading the King Koopa's Spitfire).

You know how some movies have a sad death scene sometimes? Well, if you watch that scene without watching the movie then you wouldn't cry because you dont have a connection with the character. To get this connection, you need character development, and I think you really nailed that part (I did cry when junior got stabbed). People don't like characters that stay the same throughout the whole story. The character needs to change. Mature. You, in writing this story, have shown a lot of character development in your story. Bella, Junior, Bowser, and Rosalina have all changed so much that your readers (me specifically) have created a connection with your characters. We feel what they feel. Cry when they cry. That's because we have seen what happened to them. We were there in a way. In your story, you emphasize on your character's thoughts and feelings, and that's what makes your story great.

Have you ever heard of Chekov's Gun? (I think I spelled that wrong). It says if you put a mounted gun in one scene, shoot it in the next. It basically means don't put in things that you aren't going to use. I don't want you to take this the wrong way, because I truly appreciate your work, but in my opinion, the I introduction of Aspen's father was kind of pointless, unless it's foreshadowing another plot point. Just kind of a suggestion.

Now I'm not a professional writer, but I can tell that you have a lot of potential. Don't tell yourself you're a bad writer. You are a person that has passion. Anyone who reads this can see that you pour your heart into this story, and that's what makes you a great writer. You aren't obligated to keep writing, but I know that many people, me included, appreciate the time and effort you took to give us this great story. Keep up the great work.

I’m so hype for the newest story in this amazing series to come our way

It really put a smile on my face knowing that it was Bella's painting of Rosalina that made her remember all memories that was erased.

Cause Bowser even stated that "Every entry level magic user knows that the magic that causes amnesia can be reversed by one thing... And thats love."

Its like implying that Bella's love for Rosalina as a mother figure is so great that it brought her memories back. I mean who wouldn't love a parental figure who raised you 17 years with all the care and love they could muster. I think the secret value of this story is Family love is very important, at least thats how I see it. Or I am just reading to much into it. But yeah. You know what? Im gonna hug my mom and dad right now and say I love you mom and dad to them, you should give your parents a hug too and say that you love them when you see them.

Btw awesome story! You really are a talented writer and thats just an understatement, cause I cant really put it into words how enamored I am by your stories. It made me cry and I don't usually cry to stories as good as yours, but damn man, you really made me cry like a silly high school girl reading love pocketbooks and Im a guy.

Really anticipating the third installment.. I hope Rosalina would still be there too, cause it must be pretty obvious now that she is my favorite character in Mario Galaxy. Maybe a bit of interaction between Bella and Rosalina? Idk? your call.

Keep up the good work!

Amazing ending. Super excited for the third installment.

Whens the next story coming out?

Where is the third part?

Again, amazing story. This time I engaged 5 hours (not straight) reading this story.
Thank you for your hard work.
If possible, please write ANOTHER sequel to this story.

I don't understand why Bella's full name is Annabelle MAURIZIA TOADSTOOL.
Shouldn't her last name be identical to Mario's last name?

I remember how psychotic Bowser was in the last story (Mama Rosalina).
I am positive that he will NOT do the same evil acts again, though.

Although Bowser was usually the villain in Mario series, I don't hate him. I feel sorry for him when he lost everything after losing the final battle... at least from the final battle at Super Mario Galaxy 2.

Thank you for giving Bowser another chance! I am looking forward for it!

AHHHH YES YOU FINALLY UPDATED

This is so good! Junior's engagement is so sweet - I got emotional just reading about it. Congrats on finishing another story!