This is good

Aww, poor Daphne. Now I wonder what could be in that Chapter 14...But I like how Daphne disciplines David here. She's an awesome mom. :)

I'm glad you wrote something like this. It seems funny that kids like David will have to read about 9/11, while we went through it. But I like how worried David is, and scared. I'm sure Daphne will comfort him. Good job. :)

I loved your ending and how they explained things to him was perfect. Such a wonderful story but sad remembering all the innocent people that lost their lives that day. I think everyone should learn about what happened, and how easy it is to lose a loved one and how important it is to live each day like it might be your last.

Cute chapter it is nice David has a friend right next door. I think Daphne and Niles are so wonderful with David.

You write such amazing stories, and you write all the characters so well. Poor Daphne she is so emotional but remembering that horrible day is heartbreaking.

David is a sweet boy Niles and Daphne should be proud. You are writing a really great story.

Great chapter I can see why Daphne and even Niles are upset seeing the pictures of 911. I will never forget that day, and I can't wait to see how Niles and Daphne help David learn about what happened for his homework assignment,.

Poor David he is confused and probably thinks it is his fault Daphne is upset. I am sure she is remembering the horrible day of 911, and it is bringing back horrible memories.

I wonder what is wrong, I love David in your story. I love how Daphne scolds him. I can't wait to read the rest of your story.

Great start to your new story, I love reading stories with David in them.

Great story! Very realistic and I enjoyed every moment of it. Full of heartfelt emotions and memories of that tragic day.

I really enjoyed this story. Love how David asked if his grandpa would be proud of him.

Poor Daphne...

Aww...sweet moment between David and Niles.